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    big wheel

    escalating in the feelingmy thoughts sky scrapedreaming of days in the sunworried about the future not reallyworry gets you nothing but more dramainstinct and faith in something bigger than you is vitalwe are powerful beings changing things up just...

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    • This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Chère C.,
      A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:

      This photo’s truly showing
      What I always knowed*
      Parking on the sidewalk is
      How to define off road

      So rope in a big wheel
      and you’ll be certain of
      One big wheel will be enough
      If you want lasting love

      Clumsy? Yes!
      But so what!
      There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…

      *Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
      Warm greetings, Gus

      • lol I love your offbeat poem I’ve never really been one for money but if I can make some from my artistic edeavors who knows thank Gus ❤️

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    There is a Price

    When you say you want meWell baby there are things we must get straightDepending on how you want to goI’m not an ordinary dish on a plate There are flavors to exploreAvenues you must ventureThere are deep, deep wells in...

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    • Thank you . Petter;)

    • Oh.. maybe I am submissive to him. (giggling) Thank you Crimsin

    • Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Now that’s a woman who knows her worth and isn’t afraid to state it and stand by it. There’s nothing weak about it, fierce is what this declaration is. But cleverly worded and leaving just enough to the imagination that he still has plenty of work to do.

      • Yes you are right. The mind is an aphrodisiac let it go its own path. Thank you Willow;))

  • Time
    Is it time
    I guess it’s time for me
    to give you information you see
    Because I don’t know how I was going to work this day
    Everyday is not like yesterday
    I know that you’re surprised
    I decided to do this at this moment
    Why
    I write poems, I write stories, I write facts
    When it hits me, I have to give it to you
    You understand that…Read More

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    • I want to thank you, Fia, for hosting this challenge. The low pressure approach you took to helping us all achieve the goal made all the difference in our success.

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    Time (part 1)

    Is it time I guess it’s time for me  to give you information you see Because I don’t know how I was going to work this day Everyday is not like yesterday I know that you’re surprised I decided to do this at this moment Why I...

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    • Powerfully penned, Fia. An excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Congrats on writing for 30 days straight that couldn’t have been easy. I don’t think I could do it. Appreciate you, Cuz.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian. Well, I actually did this poem free verse on the street walking to work. Its longer than this but I stopped here.

    • The inevitable impulse. The opening – “Is it time / I guess it’s time for me / to give you information” – creates a tension between the inner calling and hesitation. The subject doesn’t decide: time decides for him. It’s almost an involuntary confession.

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