I love that you chose a positive message to write of. There is never enough of that. So thank you! And the write is well crafted, full of inspiring lines to lift the reader up. Great idea and great result, Fia.

Great thoughtful writing Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with lots of deep layers my friend. Nicely done. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

This does have a positive feel to it.
You never know, sometimes acknowledging someone who’s struggling could impact their day in a positive way.
One could only hope!

I think that too often people know it’s a mask, but they want to believe it’s reality. Because having to see what makes them uncomfortable is more than they’re willing to take on. So we paste on the smile and say we’re fine, and they eagerly choose to believe it so they don’t have to acknowledge the truth. I love that the message in this is to see beyond the surface

As someone who sleeps horribly, I will take all blessings given!
Such a sweet wishful poem, Fia. What a nice gift to read this evening.

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Another excellent write with a musing feel my friend. You know I dig your musings.. I hope you did get some rest though, since you’re always working hard. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

The sense of outside, of otherness in this so so palpable. It definitely reminds me of moments when I felt on the outside looking in. I remember days when it was YOU who stopped by to reconnect me to the world. You expressed it so perfectly, Brenda 🧡

Beautiful feels, friend.

Such a beautiful poem…love the metaphors used in this lovely piece. Thanks for sharing ❤️