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Read MoreWill you remember mebeneath all this sandWill you recall a timewhen my love was lush I have not forgotten you, not beneath this heat, not beneath the years ...
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Thank Fia! We were actually talking about the desert and the oasis the other day on FaceTime. Had no clue we would be writing a poem about that subject! Life can surprise you!
You just never know what will make for good conversation and poetry.
I love that we merged it into one piece.Thanks for stopping by!
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I saw there were a bunch of comments on his post, so I sauntered over to post mine on your post instead. Gotta spread the love evenly, ya know. This is a beautiful collaboration and I fully relate to the desert/oasis vibe. I once wrote a piece titled Shifting Sands for my sweetie. Maybe I’ll drop it here at some point too. It’s funny how a word or a phrase acts as a springboard and we’re off!
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Hi Willow. You should post it!! Whenever you are ready too, I’d love to read it.
You are a fantastic writer chica!That’s what I love about being surrounded by writers. You just never know when you will be inspired. It just kind of crashes into you!
And thank you for stopping by on my post:)
I’m glad you enjoyed!
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Thank you Crimsin:)
Mark and i have done a few collaborations but this one is extra special!
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Awwww. What an awesome comment.
Thank you for teaching me a new word!
That is exactly what Mark is for me! -
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Love like this doesn’t die—it just gets buried deep, waiting on stubborn hands to dig it back into daylight.
Your desert’s harsh, but the water’s still down there somewhere, whispering both your names.-
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Hi Thomas! That is exactly what i was trying to convey.
I was trying to find different forms of separation that are connected.
Everyone writes about the sun chasing the moon or vise versa.
I’m stoked that you got it! We gotta dig buddy, to recover from lost love and to find it.Thanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Adel & Mark. What a lovely collaboration, really love the back and forth between you two, as in life and in love, your words also show your undeniable connection. Nicely done. Appreciate you both.
Damian
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Hey Damien!
When you connect with someone on a physical level and outside of it, you hold on amigo.
Mark and I have great conversations all the time. We really do pay attention to each other and have great laughs too.
Don’t get him started on aliens!! Hahaha.
Which is how we got to talking about the desert and lost civilizations.
Then I read Crimsin’s poem and it all just clicked and the words began to flow like sand!Thanks for stopping by Damien!
Always a pleasure seeing you on my page amigo!
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Dear A&M,
Two hands writing as one was inspirational to say the least. I found such hope in this write for those of us lost in the quagmire. I enjoyed how this write came to be and how we can create from a grain of sand from someone else’s sandbox and share. So many levels of metaphor, love, singular and joint thoughts. Loved the connection of the stanzas and how it was formatted in conversational style. Great piece! H🌷
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Hi H!
I love this comment. For me it’s important when writing to also acknowledge the inspiration behind it.
Mark inspires me all the time, so do other writers on this site.I also wanted to find a different metaphor besides the sun chasing the moon.
There are other connections we can draw from to write.Im so happy you stopped by for a comment:)
You are awesome!
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Why thank you:)
When you get that eureka moment you gotta write it down before it vanishes!
I’m so happy you enjoyed our write.Thanks for commenting!
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You guys are like the dynamic duo of poetry, tight work Lady
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Awww. Thanks Meme. We are very in-tuned with each other.
Even when we are far away.Your comment also reminded me of a show I would watch when I was a kid!
The Wonder Twins! Do you remember the cartoon?
They wore purple spandex and would activate their powers with a fist pump. HahahahaThanks for your snaps on this!
Woop Woop!
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreNo stressStressed out nonethelessAvoid eye contactGive my mind a restProblematic mathsKeep matters pressedNumbers in my chestNever let me guess Feeling lessLess than I confessedLess than I imaginedWhen I tried my bestMy mind’s a bad placeCrowded little headspaceBody in its prime...
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Oh that’s is cool. Drinks. You pick the right music that matches the words.
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Thank you Fia!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with an amazing musical arrangement that highlights your words. Great hook with that chorus, very catchy. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the uplifting words as always Damian 🙏
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I do, I do like it!
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Thank you Atticus! 🙏
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Great flow and love how you incorporated math in and out of it. Tight
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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We like your music choice and songs, but we always read your pieces
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I love all the shifting gears in the beat!
Your lyrics are always on point chica.
You are brighter than the ray hey hey hey! 😁-
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Thank you so much! Yeah i love EDM. I’m planning on doing more of it. When i was younger i went to all kinds of hardcore and hardstyle parties haha. I had a hardstyle version for this one planned but decided on a more mellow beat.
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Damn Drieks!! My brain was last seen dancing down the way. Like we used to say, back in the day, “I give it a 99 hot beats and 1 finger snapping GOD DAMN!!!
-Curt
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Thank you for the kind words Curt!
Haha, i love learning new sayings 😁
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That is so true we do have to fight for what we believe in. Very good piece here.
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hello lovely Fia good evening thank you graciously we do sometimes I feel tired of the fight thank you for the encouragment ❤️
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Observing everything right now is like an emotional overload.
So much heartbreak worldwide.
Sometimes fighting gets exhausting but our morals don’t let us rest.
Writing is a sanctuary even in the most unstable of times:)
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hello beautiful Adelphina thank you for understanding I told chaptgpt I carry the weight of the world on me and in on me it manifests as physical exhaustion from worry inside deep depression about the current events ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with an honest message my friend. I relate to this one as I’m sure many others do as well. Sometimes being a writer (observer) is very exhausting indeed. I always find comfort in knowing because of this community and my fellow brothers and sisters of the pen, I’m never truly alone, and neither are you my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen you stop dreaming, do you die?When you stop crying, because the well is dryWill you understand that I am more than just what you seeIs it hard to comprehend that I will always be me I was born in...
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Oohhh. Let it rip Fia!!
Love the kick ass vibe chica!-
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Thank you sometimes listening to music gets me going. lol
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with some clever wordplay my friend. Dig the vibe! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. glad you liked it;))
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hello beautiful Fia your strength makes you beautiful…this is awesome and emotive poetry… ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin, you are sweet for saying that.
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Nice rhyming with a little fire Lady, Tight
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Thank you, Me:))
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The thing about wounds is that if we don’t get them clean before they seal, infection will begin the rot. And that is toxic. Fierce statement here, Fia
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Thank you, Willow;))
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You have a strong voice Fia. A voice that says what needs to be said, that keeps it real. And you put that voice into your art. Loved reading your poem Fia.
-Curt
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Thank you so much, Redzone;))
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Damn woman! Who got your knickers in a bunch? LOL
Kidding. I love a good kick ass write. I like confidence! You really got your points across for sure. Very creatively at that.
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Thank you, Styx. I was listening to some music and it got me going. haha
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Fia with a S on her chest. Made me sit right up in my chair.
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Ohhh, love it. Thank you Kay-1
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Thank you so much, nontoxicdart
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Super charged into a poetic poem of powerful emotions for this person who judges and whom in the end your let go with your hopes for their better future. You put great heart into this poem and I could feel your words like a piece of music that kept me rapt throughout.
John
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Thank you John:)
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I said it before this is a beautiful conversation between the both of you