I enjoyed this. It’s a good read

Thanks for reading a large piece.
I am very glad you liked it.
It’s a rough idea.
We are all human.

Regards James

If you follow Rick Beato you must be a music enthusiast.
I have seen Rick discussing the impact of AI in the music industry and even he has said it’s getting harder to identy human from digitally created music.
The same can be said for any ‘writing’ site….who is doing the writing.
I for one, would never post an AI produced piece without declaring it.
Sometimes, I’ll write a piece, get AI to tidy it up and then post both versions and let others decide which is better.Usually, it’s the AI free version .
Its a crazy old world.🌞

Hell yeah, Beato, has a great show. Appreciate you.

Damian

There a few things in life I detest more than AI .. and I can only think of four members of my own species that fall into that category .. All of whom are supposedly world leaders and one of which has no intelligence whatsoever, let alone artificial .. 😎👍I found this to be a compelling read which could prove write for further debate .. Neville

I fear this is going to be a case of “the internet is forever”. Once it’s been used to train an AI, which somehow it seems like it already has, I don’t think deleting it will remove it from its “memory”. We’re entering a brave new world of technology and I’m quickly starting to feel very unprepared for it.

Powerful and poignant

This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood

Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻

This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
Just wow!!

I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!

But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.

❤️

What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

John