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    The Rain Poems

    Two toddlers wore rain In the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore the rainlike tight-fitted jeans, which clung to them so soggy, and yet in moments of gleewith a spin and a spree they giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds, as each...

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    • Phenomenally penned, Tim. Another fantastic collection my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • hello dearest Tim I wonder besides rain what these poems have in them that weave them together there is something ominous I can sense… great write 💕

    • Ahhh! 🌧

      What could be better, My Good Friend Tim, than a captivating soliloquy of imaginative Free Verse poetry from the rainbow of your dancing pen, creatively presenting the wonders of “Rain” to fill and soothe our parched imaginations.

      Nice rhymes ‘n imagery in Poem 1, and your artwork choice sets the perfect mood.
      I enjoyed each offering … particularly:

      “For an hour, the sky recites
      poems from heaven
      and I listen…mesmerized.”

      Outside my window, rain’s forecast today … I’m keeping my best umbrella and shiny red boots handy!
      Good stuff, Syr Poet … much enjoyed, as usual! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      150/100

      • Haha, shiny red boots? Thank you Richard, your comments are always entertaining and interesting. It’s always good to know there’s a master of poetry around. 🙂

    • Quite a collection, Sir Tim.
      Especially the woman in the window piece. Yet, the beginning obviously draws the reader in, with the vivid imagery. Well stocked stack of art, this.
      And good to see you here.

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    Commenting is Fixed

    Yes you read it correctly.  Commenting has been fixed.Thank you all with bearing with us as we correct the issue

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    unruly lust with the talented Adagio

    sulking in the heated lustshadows of a daunting nature huntsacred understanding victim of the hordeit is an honor to be captive to devilish devices seducing the nightsacrificing tears to the darkon my heart’s altara soul after eon’s scarsentering one life,...

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    • good morning beautiful poetess thank you graciously from us both it was a pleasure to create with him I’m happy you found it pleasing 💕

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    Update

    I want everyone to know we are still working on the issue about commenting. I hope to have this resolved as soon as possible. I do apologize for this.

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    • My only issue here is clearing notifications. I follow the link and read the comment and want to delete. Check the box and mark read – nothing. Hit the trash can – nothing. Check and bulk action delete – nothing. Refresh after – nothing. Sometimes an hour will go by and if I go back – finally! The last two days I got email notices when there were comments or posts by friends – today nothing. All notifications are clicked to on. Just quirks I guess. BTW, I LOVE IT HERE! Thanks!

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    disenchanted

    I'm a disenchanted weirdosymbolically captivated by the darkmetaphorically mesmerized by sorrowthe kind that envelops your being sadness, bane, it knows my namecorrupting my visions with bleak thoughtson the morrow, sing no more for brighter daysdarkness desires also so with vigor, I...

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    • This is woven beautifully

    • To me, this poem has shadings of Edgar Allan Poe’s, Alone. Well done 🌼

      • I’m not sure if I’ve read it I had a Poe book when I was little it is an honor thank you graciously Joe 💕I always admired his style…

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you my friend I appreciate you 💕

    • Very dark and eerie but interesting. I’m getting a dark witch feel from this one, almost like a Salem witch on the eve of her death. Great read, Crimson.

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