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Read MoreThis is in reference to the poem I made called Sadie Winters is not real. (Now deleted)It's based on an episode by Rick Beato (youtube) in which he created an AI character named Sadie Winters who is a fictional...
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Yes it is, Peter. I’m a drummer of 52 years. Thanks for the comment.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Hell yeah, Beato, has a great show. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian. I watch him all the time.
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There a few things in life I detest more than AI .. and I can only think of four members of my own species that fall into that category .. All of whom are supposedly world leaders and one of which has no intelligence whatsoever, let alone artificial .. 😎👍I found this to be a compelling read which could prove write for further debate .. Neville
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Thanks for the comment, Neville. It’s good to see you here.
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Likewise good sir 😎👍
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I fear this is going to be a case of “the internet is forever”. Once it’s been used to train an AI, which somehow it seems like it already has, I don’t think deleting it will remove it from its “memory”. We’re entering a brave new world of technology and I’m quickly starting to feel very unprepared for it.
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I can relate to your feelings, Green. Thanks for the comment.
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Powerful and poignant
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Thank you for the read and comment, Thomas. 🙂
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Read MoreBlood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...
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This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood
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Thank you Willow 🙏🏻
Your words truly mean a lot to me.
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻
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This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It really means a lot to me.
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I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.❤️
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie and
NAVINA are now friends
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Read MoreWhen a calm sky turns grey And a whispered wind cuts When the peace you need to stay But vanishes like dust Every beauty on a rose Is kissed with lust The roots never grow Past the decayed crust Word sung in a resounding hymn Played with notes Eco'd...
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OMG…. This is one of your very very best
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Thank you, Sam😊
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This is an amazing poem, dear Fía!
Abracadabra: As I speak I create!-
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Thank you Sappho.😊
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Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.
Clay
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Thank you,Clay 😊
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Nicely done Fia…
Powerful excursion…
<#3 Cipher
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Thank you, Cipher 😊
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Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.
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Thank you, Jim😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ,Damian ☺️
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A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow
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Thank you, Willow;))
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This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.
Wonderful ink.
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Thank you, Nick. I love Poe’s work
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Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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If you follow Rick Beato you must be a music enthusiast.
I have seen Rick discussing the impact of AI in the music industry and even he has said it’s getting harder to identy human from digitally created music.
The same can be said for any ‘writing’ site….who is doing the writing.
I for one, would never post an AI produced piece without declaring it.
Sometimes, I’ll write a piece, get AI to tidy it up and then post both versions and let others decide which is better.Usually, it’s the AI free version .
Its a crazy old world.🌞