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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕
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Read Moretwas daylight that ushered the darkness inwhen she on a sleepy day did sinsecreting my thoughts and dreaded deedon halted breath my wickedness shownsilently the storm brew coming without warningclouds of mistrust formed in the eyes peering at memy...
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Oh wow… I’d call this epic poetry because it tells a story. It’s also confessional.
I love this kind of naughty stuff, Crimsin. Riveting!-
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hello lovely Kitten good morning thank you graciously 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian yeah just a bit of fiction I appreciate you too 💕
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Described ‘the black dog’ perfectly.
Sleep well
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously for reading and commenting with such an apt description of depression I’d never heard that expression before 💕
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I think it was how Winston Churchill described his depression.Most folks down under use it as a euphemism for depression.
Take care 😘
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![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
You really nailed this diagnosis, girl.
I felt kind of rough after reading it. Everyone can relate to this.-
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hello beautiful Kitten you are appreciated thank you 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hi dearest Damian good afternoon thank you graciously 💕
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![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Wow, that’s awesome. What a sexy voice, Damian. Cool idea too.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for listening, DK. Glad you enjoyed the interview my friend. I have bass in my voice, lol. So I’m told anyway. It was all Fia’s idea to record it, I thought it was cool as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That was so much fun. Thank you for the interview, Damian
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
You’re welcome my friend, and thank you! It was fun and a great idea you came up with. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I think these are so cool. Everyone likes to be heard, and everyone has a story. It was also a great idea for you to be the final interview. Protest poetry haha. Maybe anarchy poetry? Plenty of subjects this world has.
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Thanks so much for listening, Nick. Everyone does love to be heard, and most writer’s including me love to talk. lol. A million subjects out there. Thanks for the support my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work.
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Thanks so much for listening, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the interview my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad this one made it’s showing. I was going to ask whose page it was gonna end up on but ya beat me to it. It needs to be here! Man behind the questions. And now a new chapter begins? Who’s next, my friend?
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Thanks so much for listening and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the interview my friend. Fia, was cool with it being presented with the others. I’m glad it’s here as well. Time will soon tell. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.
xoxo