Oh wow she went up in flames and covered you in ash. This is so good. I like how you started off with the roar of the engines. Like you want to rev up the intensity about to play out here.

Well we saw her through a friend over at DUP, she was a true inspiration. Thanks Lady

One word. Apocalyptic!
Like Tina Turner in Mad Max beyond the thunder dome.
Great storytelling with a cool vibe.

We try still wondering what happened with your reservation piece. LiLi was an actual goddess we don’t remember Aztec or Mayan we just decided to play with her with a poetess. Thanks

It’s not a bad skill set to have, we personally know quite a few females that ride. Thank you for reading and commenting Lady

give up tobacco
for
more
touch
enjoy the human music

This is a peaceful piece with a tempting picture

Beautiful work.

Thank you Fia and Thomas for reading.
It was a quiet morning on the back deck.

Some people sit back and enjoy the scenery
Others want to memorize it and spread the word.
Thanks for sharing!

Classic…..made me giggle.

I thought you loved me….brilliant

Okay first stanza is the shocker.
Then you twisted it in the last stanza.
Mouth open all through this read. Then I laughed.

I enjoyed this surprising tale. That darn Agnes!

She’s appeared in two previous pieces. She’s the church bookkeeper who is stealing to fund her casino addiction.

Saint Nick might have a fondness for other pastors wives….he’s human after all.
🙏

I read this backward. I read the second piece before this. Now it makes sense. lol No Sparks,,yeah right