Oh! This reminds me of when me and my brother would play in the rain when we were kids.
In the front yard we didn’t have stickers so we would be barefoot. Lol
Good times!

childhood was full of such days for me I’ve always been an outdoor person this is beautiful Tim ❤️

Powerful. So true.

Beautifully penned, Tim. Excellent write with a nostalgic flavor my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Time you word painted a vision of innocence here. I am enchanted by the scene you wrote so well. You captured the joy of childhood wonderfully and i enjoyed this much.

John

It’s so cold it burns. The rhyme scheme is excellent.

I like this, and the title is perfect.

We also thought of this as beyond a first date when you’re invited inside and beyond a good night kiss. Tight

Well, she could not get you out of her mind. It’s funny how that happens you always think of the missed opportunities. This had me engaged from beginning to end.

Thanks.