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Read MoreThey're doing tricks on the blindAnd busy bee got controlThe other brick in the wallAnother day on the jobAnd that's the way things work Digging, shoving, to fuel the machineryWatch the pistons pumpThat's the drive that keeps the heart alive And...
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Appreciate it that Fia. Thank you!
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Powerful and poignant.
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Thank you Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I concur with Fia & Mary this has a lyrical feel my friend. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello Damian. Thanks for the kind words.
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Thanks Mary. You kick ass!
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Cool. I’ll be waiting.
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A shadow-born whisper, the phrase itself feels like a seed of myth, half curse, half invocation, sprouting in the dark soil of secrecy. A living emblem of power and paradox… The serpent coils around the hidden flame, a covenant etched in shadows and bone, from silence it blooms, a forbidden crown.
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An absolutely lovely comment. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreI love youI have no guide to help meNothing to protect me from your stormI felt like an idiot sitting in your carYour face was so beautifulI didn't think I can love anyoneI love youWouldn't it be great if...
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This is such a heartfelt plea. I felt this.
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Glad you enjoyed Fia. Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I agree with Fia, this is a heartfelt plea, or a confession possibly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the comments!
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Read MoreBeautiful Bruises I cannot keep this to myself he said and then he kissed her shoulder naked .. Although indeed, that move was oh’ so very lightly executed .. Then resting on both elbows down he went oh’ so very low and slow .. Though...
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You ALWAYS write in deep details making your poem very special, making it feels real, like it’s here and now… another wonderfully passionate sweet romantic love poem✨💖🔥💕
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You know how to make someone feel a little bit special too my very dearest Light💕 thank you so much for calling on me and for just being You 💕😎💛🌻👍
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💖🤍💕🥰✨🌻
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😎🌻🌻🌻💛💛💛⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟🌟👍
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The pair of beautiful bruises seemed to be a secret that was shared and created a fond memory
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Thank you most kindly for visiting my words here and sharing your thoughts on the matter in question .. Neville 😎👍
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Tremendous. You nailed it.
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Cheers Thomas .. that is most kind of you .. Neville 👍
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Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cheers D .. N .. 😎👍
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Read MoreMy childhood grocery storelooms legendaryIt had an enormous step on scalea dull light greenwith a long old-timey pointeraiming accusingly at oversizedtoo high numbersby 11 years oldscales were scaryMy childhood grocery store,Publix,had a big deli counterwe got some of our deli...
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Outstanding piece of writing Pinkdreams. I never walked into a Publix, since there not located in the NY tri-state area. Your memories and description of this store is unbelievable. The poem was done so well that as I began reading it, I knew and felt we were in the early to mid 70’s. The photo is also an extra bonus. As we get older, certain places and landmarks disappear. Our memories may fade a bit as well. At the same time, a certain item or smell may bring us back and reboot memories that were stuck somewhere in our brains decades ago. Nice work.
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VoI- Thank you so much for understanding, and for the nice praise. It means a lot to me.
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I enjoy poems or stories from people that can tap into their memories and write a compelling, nostalgic piece for that moment in time. You totally succeeded here.
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So good to hear from you. I think you did offer condolences back then, so thank you then and now.
Why did I think you lived in Texas? I’m so envious of those experiencing Fall and cold weather. 91 this afternoon in Phoenix. Stupid.
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One powerful line. With many meanings. This is good.
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Appreciate that Fia. Thanks!!
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Powerful, Keith. Got me pondering.. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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This one line says everything. The power of opposites! They are the two sides of the same coin and prerequisites to conceive and appreciate the counterpart.
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Hello Elke. Thank you for the gracious comment. xo
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Right on.
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Thanks fellow poet.
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This has a rhythm to it that makes it feel like it belongs in a song. Nice