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    bleed

    in my weeping time I forget who I amthe hurt too much to bearbaring all to feel the sting of rejectioninside myself falldeep into my fantatical worldsa place of wonderin my night terrors, the demons enter with realitysadness abounds...

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    • Chère C.,
      It almost looks like as if you are tapping from a different source.
      Goes for the art work too.

      Less black and white with sharp divisions, more dark gradually turning light. I hope my English does what I hope.
      I mean it as a compliment anyway. You warm me to your art. Love it a lot!

      Keep on keeping on said Curtis Mayfield.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • I remember feeling like this. It was a beautiful and cruel woman who made me feel that way. I have learnt men are equally as cruel.
      Regards
      James

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    delve

    delve into my painwash yourself in my sinto covet a connection, my sadness is an addictioninject yourself with my hurt and get highthe moon laughs at my insanitythinking you would carestarshine smiles, because I still doselfish thoughts, craves you...

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    cold

    my sadness grows solemn in its painhurt a feeling, I can read peoplebut they deny the truthsure, you've seen itlike the husband having an affair and denying itlost in emotions none of them validatedmy thoughts find you but you...

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    Aspirated

    how does it feel to diestaring it right in the facehow does it feel to lieknowing it makes the blood racewhy does it end this wayleaving an empty void insidewhy does it stop todaytaking that remainder of pride left to...

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    • Superb work. Powerful.

    • Now this one I can see a bit of the dark side. There’s a deeply relatable element to this that transcends subject or time. Depending on the point of being, it fits multiple topics. We write from a perspective and when it’s shared, it develops unexpected layers. I would like to have seen it performed during your 15 minutes of fame. It must have had a tremendous draw to it, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in a very dark place when I penned this one, I was going through something heavy, and it came out in the words. The one thing I truly love about what we do as writers, is the multiple meanings the reader or listener can take away from our words. We as the writer know what we’re really talking about or going through when we create. The reader doesn’t have those blinders on, they are in fact another point of view, without the writers biases. It is a great little song. It got a response from the crowd. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This makes me feel your pain. The growl had to be wicked on this song.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in pain when I penned this, so the words are ripe with it. The growl makes its point known. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • hugs dearest Damian I am person who doesn’t know how to stop loving… I feel this write very deeply beautiful soul ❤️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I don’t know how to stop myself. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Your words transform pain into art, dear Damian! I feel your heart and soul dripping from your pen. Intense and beautiful!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s so kind of you to say, what a lovely comment. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Powerful piece of poetry Damian. Dark and intense! Great work here.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I could be dark and intense sometimes for sure. This was a pretty painful time I was going through, life has a way of fucking with you sometimes! lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    down south

    in my waiting time I think of youpure beauty and longingwistful understanding to desireyour western drawl remindeds me of summermy passion stirred and I feel the pangs againto go down south and meet you barefoot in the grassmy soul...

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