Bat Powers

Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

amuck

Poetry, Romance

April 15, 2025

8

my thoughts crash into you with a great ache of rejectionmy face turned towards yours, you look awayassaulted vision, you with someone elsemy sacred vault spill outmy vulnerability on displaywords tumble from my lipsones of hurt and sadnessuntil it...

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- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Brenda, you have this talent to bring us into that headspace of hurt and longing. Nicely done
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    hello lovely Fia sadly this is kind of true story…I deeply appreciate your thoughts and thank you graciously 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Superb work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  As always Brenda, you’re an amazing, very diverse writer. You could do anything. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Powerful write, Brenda. Great read. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

little tree

Poetry

April 15, 2025

6

My thoughts worry I don't feel good todayMy nerves are on edge, and my soul feels rankledIt's a beautiful sunny day, and I can't get in tuneIt just makes my foul mood stark in comparisonAlcatraz, except my prison is...

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- NAAJIR
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Love this. Trees speak to my spirit as well. A reliable grounding force.
  I dug this vibe thru and thru. Thx for posting, Brenda
  It’s a good start for an ordinary Tuesday
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    hello dearest Naajir thank you for feeling me on this write yes trees with their stoic knowledge calm I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas I appreciate your thoughts 💕
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Nature helps so much more with our issues then medicine or people trying to figure out our problems. I’ll see you in the woods my friend. Love this poem. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith I love nature 💕
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• 1 year, 5 months ago

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goldenmyst wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

Propheteering

Poetry

April 15, 2025

6

Propheteering Trickster Wiley CoyoteFrom the bar associationRivals great OzymandiasFor the hourglass sands of immemorialTo sift like silt through the YangtzeWhile a British merchant colonist in ShanghaiLooking dapper in his colonel’s uniform with walking caneGlimpses through his monocle The misty mysticism...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I like how you bring all the religious patriarchs into this piece.
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thanks so much Fia, much appreciated. Been grooving to Kerouac’s poetry and got inspired. Glad you liked the result, my friend.
  
  John
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Super clever poem John. Intelligent and well executed.
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thank you so much Visions. I have been tripping on Kerouac’s poetry. Glad you liked my poem, my friend.
  
  John
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, John. This write has a lot of depth, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - goldenmyst
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Gracias mi amigo. Very much appreciate your read and taking in my poem. Thank you so very much.
    
    John
magichearts wrote a new post

• 1 year, 5 months ago

Who am I ?

Short Stories

April 15, 2025

2

Who am I ?You heard it right. This is the only question I keep asking myself every now and then and for a long time it has remained unanswered. Why only this question? Because it soar emerged from an...

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2 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  This is something to ponder on. Who are you really?
  - magichearts
    1 year, 5 months ago
    
    Thank you. I don’t know really. I am still trying to figure it out
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