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Those last two lines are fireworks. I like the fact that you kept it tastefully erotic without it becoming graphic. That is the level of creative adult writing that is noticed for its literary prowess. Well done.
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, Balsam. An excellent erotic write with feverish wordplay my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow.. you certainly have a way with words..!! Captivating and erotic..!! 👍
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Read MoreSubtleties and innuendo leading to rendezvousPerforming fellatio in the tempo of adagioTongue plucking pizzicato lips gliding glissandoShaft stiffening with harmonious crescendoThroat rumbling resonanceYielding climactic effervescenceVeiled in the ebony nightConfided only to...
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Oh, this is good!
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Thank you!
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this very beautiful I love the seduction of your vocabulary ❤️
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, Balsam. Excellent write with amazing wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you!
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I can’t say it better than those whom have already commented! Well done! :^D
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A well written, sensual piece. Well done, Balsam!