- I Alight
I alight upon your feathery laugh
and float weightless
lighter than air
hovering
desiring
Desiring to have the weight of your body
ground me
blanket me with its heat
with its strength
You become charged with electricity
and grip me tightly
yet melt in my hands
pliant and maleable
Your response is pure and undiluted
gushing over me
like a silken wave of warm water
I am buoyant
afloat in the warm gush of adrenaline
as your mouth glides across my neck
your teeth gratifyingly grip my skin
I turn my head
to open my throat to your desire
I blossom under your warmth
feeling robust and colorful
festooned in delight
flourishing with concupiscence
You open me up like a flower
bonding
clinging intimately as if one singular creature
amorously rumbling, murmuring, grinding
Like Desdemona and her lover
as the beast with two backs
in Shakespeare’s Othello
Concluding with tintinnabulating ripples of sensation
we liquefy in each other’s embrace








A well written, sensual piece. Well done, Balsam!
Those last two lines are fireworks. I like the fact that you kept it tastefully erotic without it becoming graphic. That is the level of creative adult writing that is noticed for its literary prowess. Well done.
Thank you very much!
Passionately penned, Balsam. An excellent erotic write with feverish wordplay my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
Wow.. you certainly have a way with words..!! Captivating and erotic..!! 👍