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Read MoreMy soul lost its way, I'm dissociatingBarely can remember your touch But i'm cravingYour Intricate choice of words, the sound of your voice Erased from my supple memoryI beg you, please contact me.Have me reminisce of the sweetness of...
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When you have this once in a lifetime connection, but an impossible situation, you need to get over it fast…
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Powerfully penned, Jade. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ⚘️
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Read MoreI tried to feel somethingI loved her & she loved meI don't know what happenedEverything was going wellThen all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to meI tried to get rid of the...
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Well Damn. That was a eureka moment.
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Thanks!
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That one took a turn. Great write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it. Thanks
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Thank you
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Best part: “I got cold like there was a stranger next to me…” thanks for the great read!
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Thank you Daniel. I appreciate you.
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Visions, this packed a mighty punch. You wrote your emotions out with the dexterity of a poet who can really make his feelings known with no room for doubt. Well done.
John
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Hello John. This was based on an old relationship I had. Similar thoughts and emotions ran through me at that time. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreAfter a night of some intense bowling, I saw this awesome pair of bowling shoes near the counter. They weren't black and red. They were yellow & blue. Plus, they were my size. The colors looked great! I decided...
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Green & yellow…wonder what’s special about that combo. Dreams can be such a trip. Happy bowling!
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Not sure. As long as this dream doesn’t become a reality, I’m good. Thanks Willow.
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Maybe one day we’ll go together. Thanks Adira.
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Visions, there is not a dull moment in this poem. A darkly lit star of a poem. You write this so superbly. Straight out a horror movie script as only a master screenplay writer can create.
John
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Thanks John. I appreciate your kind words.
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Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. That’s what I think. Kick ass write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You rock Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreWe are hideousWe mate and create something horrificSluts and killersMean blood spillersWhores and fuckersFools and suckersMonster fucking dadsSisters born with crabsMonster slut mothersIncest fueled brothersWe the monstersOne nation under a demigodWith obligation and injustice for all
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I feel we are part of a Stephen King novel sometimes. Great write.
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Good Stephen King novels. Some of his novels are godawful. Thanks Jade.
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That is true. Thanks Adira.
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I still thinking Matrix meets Terminator. Way things are going though, could end up like, The Running Man. Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see it happening. Appreciate the comments.
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