Brilliant work.

You’ve surprised me with this one.

Very very good💋

You are so versatile in your writing. Love it Dk.

I think this poem can be interpreted in different ways. It can the literal death or the symbolic death as in writer’s block. And you have spoken of that beautifully! Well done “)

I’m so glad, Mr. Dragon! Ironically, I was just on DUP and had a note from administration that they wanted to include this poem in the DUP Anthology under dark poetry. I happily gave them permission.

xoxo

You should go over there and offer some of your poems. They were all amazing. I’m thinking they have waited a little late to start collecting pieces for this anthology. Lots of people have already closed their accounts.

Sorry… I’m not going to comment on this… I have to take a shower

Wait, don’t you need to wash your underwear?

Well, I could write some nasty words where you could feel them…

If that picture is your outside… then please kill me with you

Thanks! Being inside oneself too much is crushing too.

Pink, being outside is the best medicine. Your poem is so vivid with the pining of the outside written in lines that have incredible clarity and convey your feelings perfectly. Enjoyed reading this tonight.

John

Pain is a universal emotion to be cherished.
A language we feel, yet speak not one word of.

It’s beautiful really.
Just like your words.
Thank you.

Beautifully penned, Jade. A nice read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Pain is physical….. suffering is mental.

Let suffering go, not easy, but you’re the one hurting yourself.

Very powerfully and intelligently crafted piece.🙏

(check spelling on ‘through’ 3rd sentence)

So, the first line of this poem is captivating and sets the tone. It could almost be a poem unto itself. I like how you explore this relationship for the reader, the feelings and dissolved expectations… the emptiness left and the questions we never want to be answered.

Thank you kindly for the comment, I just was able to let go, after 10 years….🫣⚘️

Cheers! 😅