Backdeckbenny (Peter)

S. Libellule wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Rough, Raw, Righteous

Poetry

May 22, 2025

5

Rough, Raw, Righteous Tongue presses deep—not a kiss, but conquest,a moan muffled in the mouth,a gasp stolen before it can rise. Fingers probe my moistness—not gentle, but knowing,with relentless intent,mapping every slick secret. My wrists pinned overhead—you are gravity,I am undone.Each breath...

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4 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Sex should never be about love…..ask any other living creature.
  
  Great work again🙏
- Rubyredheart
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  “Hips that open like scripture”
  great simile!
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  My friend this is an erotic powerhouse written as only you can. Truly a masterwork of sensual composition. You take the sexual encounter to the level of pure instinctual joy. Love what you wrote here.
  
  John
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, LDF. A very hot write indeed my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
S. Libellule wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Pure Distillation

Poetry

May 22, 2025

1

I love living a life in this inkpenning my words up to the brinkthe very edge of every pagecrafting poems salient and sage Burn my candle down to its wickwhile I pen within inks ever thickall across these thinnest of...

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- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, LDF. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Fragments of Memories

Poetry

May 22, 2025

15

Fragments of Memories From the left to the rightFrom the right to the leftIn the rhythm of a pendulum The old man looks straight aheadHe has forgotten who and where he isSometimes the veil of dementia lifts Revealing fragments of memories From...

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12 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautifully written achingly sad.
  
  Good work Elke
  - Sappho (Elke)
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, Peter! Yes, it’s tragic, and the worst thing is it is based on a true story.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  WOW! This is one heavy piece. Sad, heartbreaking & tragic. The mind is a terrible thing to lose. Great piece Sappho.
  - Sappho (Elke)
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Yeah, losing one’s mind must be horrible! The number of people suffering from dementia is increasing, and I think the reason is not only the higher life expectancy nowadays but also depleted soils and incorrect nutrition.
    As always, thanks a lot for your feedback dear Keith!
- Average Joe
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Deep dive with a hit. Powerful. 🌼
  - Sappho (Elke)
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you for reading and commenting, Joe! My gratitude!
- Willow
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  The world must seem a terrifying & surreal place when the mind drifts in & out of presence. This one aches
  - Sappho (Elke)
    1 year, 1 month ago
    
    Yes, Willow, this is certainly terrifying. And there are different clinical pictures of dementia. I think the worst is the one you consciously know that you are suffering from dementia but there is nothing you can do against it…
    Thank you very much for your meaningful comment!
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully aching. The suffering of the mind, suicide as a means of escape from that sorrow, and the ending was a good punch to the reader!
  
  Daniel
  - Sappho (Elke)
    1 year, 1 month ago
    
    Life itself often tells the most tragic stories. I simply had to write a poem on this heartbreaking case.
    Lots of thanks for your kind comment, Daniel!
    Great to meet you here again!
- Sappho (Elke)
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Yes, the topic is indeed disturbing but nevertheless it is important. More and more people have to or will have to deal with dementia.
  Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, Seacat!
- Sappho (Elke)
  1 year, 1 month ago
  
  Thank you so much for sharing your personal experiences and for writing your kind comment, Adira!
Nick DC and Visions_of_Insanity are now friends

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Nick DC
@nickdc
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Sold

Poetry

May 22, 2025

6

Many years spent passing the blame All that negativity burned a hole inside No matter how high it ends the same In an empty gutter of swallowed pride Lessons never learned lead to demise How many times until fear takes hold? Blissful ignorance holds numb...

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- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Killer piece my friend. A great poem to think about, especially if you sold your soul.
  Question for you Damian…Did you sell your soul for Rock n Roll?
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No, I never went that far. lol. If I had and this was all the farther I got, then I would have got fucked on that deal. lol. I tend to complain sometimes, but this isn’t one of those times. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  If ever there was a declaration for choosing your life wisely, this is it. We get one shot, make it count. And never sell out. I’d bookmark this if I could, so consider it bookmarked, my friend!
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Honored to be a chapter in the book. Spot on in your interpretation. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Sometimes I feel like I sleepwalk through life. Especially since I work a lot. Great ink.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the write my friend. It can be hard when one is working a lot, but I’ve read your work, you’re wide awake to the sleepwalking I’m speaking of. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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