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Thank you, Damian
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Woow ❣️❤️🔥
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Are we speechless? 😉
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I mean, it’s a good question right?! Glad you enjoyed, thank you.
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HJ it is always such a pleasure having you in my comment section. So glad you got a good feel 😉 xx
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Mission accomplished! ❤️
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Passionately penned, P.G. Might I add while it did got hot in here, that this is also a very clever write my friend. Love breaking the 4th wall much? lol. That was really cool actually giving the reader a role inside the fantasy, by the way it occurs to me if you didn’t intend it that way and were somehow unaware, that I might have just opened Pandora’s box. I’m going with you intended it that way. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha if I told you, dearest Damian, it wouldn’t be my best keep secret anymore would it? 😉 Good eye though my friend. Your observation is refreshing!! xx
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Erotica with humor woven into it hehe 😜 I like that! Bravo!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed. xx
~P.G💋
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I am not late to this party just late in commenting. lol
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Playing with fire burns,
As these hot lines playing with us.Shh..I’ve got the keys. But not now.
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Well played out erotic scene. Loved how the anticipation bult as the story unfolded. And loved the playful reactions you had as he orchestrated your pleasure.
John
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Read MoreYou suffocate me with your sweet lies They hope that every honey suckle word that drips from your lips is truth Buying into the soft grave that has been dug out for them Instead, it feeds into their naivete Relishing the feel of...
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Tick tock
Great write Fia.
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😄 thank you Peter
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. This one gives me a sense of Deja Vu. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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You are right, Keith. Thank you
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Read MoreIt is not your job to fix meYou were not the one who broke meDeath has a number and coming for meYou need to walk away you cannot fix me I walked into the room and noticed youAnger and rage...
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The title hooked me in. This journey begins at the end, I hope there is a follow up poem, Fia. Enjoyed this piece.
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Thank you, Daniel. Maybe there is. Will the Angel or the Devil win? Hmm, that is the question. ;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This write has a lyric vibe my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damin. Lyric feel to it? I love that.;))
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” It is not your job to fix me
You were not the one who broke me ”
Blessings to you…first off.
Much respect to you during your journey through Shadow Work
Your introspection is deeply appreciated
Heavy write indeedNaaj
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Thank you, Naaj. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreThere is certainly no doubt...I have a doctorate in Without—earned this coveted Ph.D.by living this life of lonely me. Wearing this chronic frown,I had no need of cap and gown,no need for any commencementupon this stage of dour cement. For all...
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Powerfully penned, LDF. Deep and introspective my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“doctorate in Without” love it!
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian