Brenda, I cannot imagine the pain you’re going through. Losing a parent is nothing compared to losing a child. My heart and prayers with you. You can do him justice now for holding onto all the memories and writing about them. I hope that helps a lil’.

Daniel

thank you graciously dearest Keith I don’t want to be sad anymore but it occurs to me I am altered I deeply appreciate your presence and love here 💕

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful Angel thank you what a tender and loving song…it’s very hard I keep remembering the day he was born and his milestones I miss him…I want to quit being sad but I don’t know how…I appreciate you listening 💕

We are the only key bearers to own souls yes. Beautifully penned as usual S.

Daniel

Tremendous.

Powerfully penned, LDF. Honest and raw my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes. You are the only key to unlock the secret of me. That is so true. I love this piece. LDF

Powerfully penned, Nick. Another level on this write, nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like this. The in-between verses enhance the piece very well.

I like different. Very much a high compliment for me.

Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

That’s such a great compliment. Thanks very much, friend.

Uncompromisingly penned, Nick. Raw and to the point, and it goes on in the world today. Powerful work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hehe, in her own way yes. I kinda loosely based this off of a friend of mine. Though I made her sound like more of a slut haha. But she was very flirty, the life of the party kinda person. Whenever you could get her to talk seriously though it would be about how she was having a lot of family issues. Which showed me that the flirting was a bit of a way to deal with those emotions.

Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

Always felt like I needed to keep my poetry raw. I never wanted to censor anything down.

Thanks for the read, much appreciated.

Comes off to me as someone fighting depression. Finding away to move forward. Or maybe that’s just me hehe.

Great ink

Fantastic work. Powerful.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They sure as hell don’t help matters. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian

Omg, there are so many layers to this one. I read the comments above mine & saw where each came from. This one is a head tilted, brain-teaser. I see isolation, slight inspiration skirting around the edges, darkness peering though & the inevitability of death. I haven’t figured out an improvisation for that one yet. My daughter has decreed I’m not allowed to die though. Not sure that’s gonna workout for her but she says “that’s a you problem, figure it out.” If you know a cheat code on that, I’d be grateful if you’d share, my friend