I’m so in awe (jealous) of your flow…

Thank you for sharing!

This poem itself is wildfire, S. Yes, reveal the real you.. more and more in your work! Another great read…

Daniel

WHO has ever heard of a generic dragon? Just wow. I don’t think so.
I love this piece, though. You elaborate the exhausting discouragement of inherent transparency to the point of being invisible. We’re all just another ant on the hill… until we drag home that rubber tree plant. Or, you can just blow fire! It worked for Godzilla.

You’re no more generic than a Ferrari. Give me a ride.

Superb work. Powerful.

Life of a writer, LDF. Powerful my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much Mary! ❤️🙏🏻

Nicely penned… has a nice flow to it… last line eachoes…

The imagery of a heart shaped hole is amazing. I love the symbolism and the way you elaborate your feelings. You matched this up well with the music.

Beautifully penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Nick. Aren’t head games fun? Been there my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well thankfully I don’t have this problem. Not that I haven’t had this problem before, and more times than I’d like to admit haha. I wrote this after a coworker of mine was telling me he hadn’t had sex in two years, and the women he tries to get with seem to string him along. Kinda reminded me of when I would have a crush, and just some women would love to keep you at a distance.

BTW: I don’t have a cleaning lady. I’m actually not that rich lol.