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Read MoreThe door slammed behind me, indicating that the chief must have decided I was in the wrong and her incompetent rookie was in the right.“What the hell were you doing coming in the back way? You are no longer...
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my story;))
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Read MoreAugust Moon He hailed from Dartmoor, near the prison townWhile she was born to poor folk on the moorThey chanced upon love’s passion, so profoundAnd met just months before the start of war She knew he was the one, when...
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The way you open this up I feel I am reading the Mists of Avalone. I like this
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Thank you!
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Brilliantly penned, Reggie. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are too kind.
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Read MoreClose my eyes right before the impactStray bullets masked as fake applause Through all the pain my soul still intactFuck being perfect I embrace my flaws Takes more imagination than I possessTo pretend their intentions aren’t cruelInstead of knowing they made...
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You start out with the bullet. Damn
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know how to make an entrance or introduction in this case. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I agree with Fia. Very powerful write Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re welcome. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ya know, I would love to sit down one day with a cup of coffee, a cat & a fire just to read your entire collection. You never…not once…disappoint, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart such a cool and touching comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes life is like playing Russian Roulette. There’s truth in this.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It sometimes seems that way, I wish it wasn’t. Appreciate you.
Damian
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We play Russian Roulette with our lives everyday. Sad but true. Powerful piece my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunately, that appears to be the case. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreKafka: I exist in a corridor without doors,where names crumble before they are read.Each face I create dissolves into the mist,like a crime without a defendant, like love without a letter. Marilyn: I exist in the light that never rests,trapped...
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for being there my friend. ❤
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The back-and-forth banter is done well. The use of questioning each other I enjoyed.
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Thank you, appreciate you!
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The dialogue was great. Your a talent. Well done my friend.
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Viva Keith… I keep waiting for your comments.
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Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!