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Read MoreHow did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...
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Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
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I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
Just wonderful:)-
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Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
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Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
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Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
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I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
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Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that. -
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❤️
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We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
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Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
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Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
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Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
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Absolutely.
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Read MoreI don't know whose idea it was.To make the villains attractive at first sight.Whose choice was it and why? Why do we feel attraction or fly?Oh,and why can't it be the good guy?Standing there,catching my eye. But being attracted to the...
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Read MoreHumpy TrumpyBy FlatDaddy Oh, old Humpy Trumpy said there is no listof those scary people like Epstein who kissedand did awful things to young girls, it is known --done so long ago that they now are all grown.That...
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There are no words to describe the utter stupidity and self centredness of those that voted for Mr Trump.They have put at risk their own democracy by electing Trump et al to govern.
Biden wasn’t perfect, no body is, but at least he had American interests at heart.
Your poem reminded me that there is still hope ….🙏-
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Thank you. We can only hope that enough of us wake up and take our country back. We need the Supremes to do the right thing, too — a tough job, but it shouldn’t be.
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Great write
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Thanks, Fred. Not what I would prefer to write — but what I must.
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Read More© 2025 The Dragon’s LairBy FlatDaddy If you squinted a little, Waco, Texas in 1955 looked quite like one of those quaint, almost country big towns, you’d see on the cover of “The Saturday Evening Post.” It was a quiet Baptist...
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Okay, I was the older sibling, and I would never do something like that to my sister. Sure, we fought but that was normal. To make you believe he was taken by someone and hurt or killed was mean. Good story
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True story, too. And boys are very different — at least in Texas, at least in military families. Larry now is a very gentle man who would do anything for me — or anyone else, for that matter. Thanks for your comments.
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What doesn’t kill ya makes you tougher? While we didn’t have a lair like yours, our favorite swimming hole had raw sewage draining into it. I love these kinds of tales, as you know. An entertaining story, for certain.
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Thanks, Sam, as always, though I’ll never catch up to you. But I have become a tough old bird over all these years. Doesn’t keep me from squawking now and then, though.
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Read MoreIn blackened dreamsa mist descends from the hills Unsuspecting Only the dust moves,like a funeral veil of melancholy Sorrow The traveler of unknown plainsthrough darkness & light Confusion Flowers of desirable bloomLethal in touch and smell Death
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This feels haunting and ethereal. The imagery of mist, dust, and fatal blossoms captures that eerie beauty of twilight so well. A powerful blend of melancholy and mystery.
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Hi Romaj. Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated!
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Very scary walk. I love the description.
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Perfect for the time of year. Thanks Fia.
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I love this twilight mood in the forest which you describe perfectly here. A little dangerous, magical and most mystical! A mind blowing imagery in this awesome poem, my friend!
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Thanks my dear friend…Always!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Into the book it belongs! Dig this, brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Over deliciously penned, my friend.
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Your comments are very gracious. Appreciate it
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian