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      while walking to the local marketwe almost get run downin my head I'm thinking 'what a fucking asshole!!'as bad as I want to lose my cool and flip them the birdmaybe say some profane wordsI see you and your...

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      • Oh yeah, everyday life can suck badly sometimes! The more valuable it is to have someone at your side who is well balanced and reminds you that getting upset about small things is only waste of time and energy. We can’t change them anyway. Much more important is to focus on the things that are really meaningful to you and that you can have impact on!

      • I concur with Sappho, and hope everyone has (or finds) someone that keeps them grounded in this way. Awesome write, my friend!

        Clay

        • When I think of my wife I think of someone that’s kind and hopeful. Even though I’m not like that it makes me wish I was.

          Thanks for the read friend

      • Sounds like you found that rare individual who grounds you. I have one of those too. The world is getting harder to find center in. Everything feels poised to set us off. Finding that pin-point of calm in all that is a treasure. Beautifully written, my friend

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      Styles clash often in writing Collaborations take chemistry  Ego’s can lead to infighting Often shrouded within mystery   When successful it’s grand  Playing to each others strengths Turning glass back into sand Always going to great lengths   Bad vibes will lead to disaster Resorting in Kamikaze antics  Mind starts spinning...

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      • This is a brilliant and honest look at the collaborative process. You perfectly capture the tension and the beauty of it. The line “Turning glass back into sand” is an amazing image for the way things come together.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Collaborations are a dance in a way. Got to read your partner. It’s tricky to get magic but when it works it’s beautiful.

        Great ink friend.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is a dance, that can be magical indeed. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • I remember you from the ember DU days (daze?) but our paths never crossed. You were always so encouraging and supportive of fellow comrades. That is an art in itself. Keep writing fella.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ghosteen. So glad our paths finally crossed then, nice meeting you my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Great and beautifully written reflections, dear Damian! I agree, the collaboration process is an art itself. Different writing styles collide, and if they are harmonic, the result will read like penned with one ink. When the styles are very different, maybe a piece of abstract art will be created. The diversity of possible collaborations makes them beautiful and interesting!

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you totally, it is like a dance of sorts. But it is a magical process. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Even Lennon and McCartney couldn’t get along in the end. Collaborations are famous throughout history. But sometimes ideas go in different directions, ego’s overtake, and animosity takes over. It can be sad, very sad when things fall apart.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That is true, a lot of duo’s grow apart. People can grow apart over time. Addiction, sobriety, faith, and starting families all have an effect on the collective relationship. It can be sad, indeed. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Friends drift apart. As you mentioned in your last comment. Also we just change. Many things we don’t enjoy or like from when we were kids or teenagers. Keeping a friend or two from your youth though is important. I feel it’s the bridge to a life that was a simpler, more meaningful time. We grow old, but the kid inside never dies. Great write Damian.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, time itself changes people. I’m connected with my inner child. lol. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • I always find collaborating incredibly intimidating. How to find a balance where both voices carry equal weight? Some styles are more dominating & others more gentle. But I’ve seen jarringly different styles woven beautifully in a single piece. I love the glass back to sand metaphor. Deconstructing to its base element. All comes from the same beach, as it were. The places your pen travels, my friend…

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My favorite line! It’s a dance for sure, sometimes teetering on the brink of disaster, only to be saved at the last possible moment of the grand finale. At least that’s my experience with the whole process. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • I have been asked many times but even though I am occasionally tempted, I have always tended to shy away .. having said that, I have a great deal of admiration for anyone who chooses to go down that particular poetic and or storytelling route & gets something out of it other than enjoyment or a headache .. I imagine that here you have given this particular reader something to think about long after the curtain has been drawn .. Kindest regards to both you n your pen Damian .. Neville

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve collaborated in songwriting, not as much on poetry, though I’ve done a few. It’s a dance basically, and chemistry plays a big part. But it’s a cool experience, never say never my friend. Appreciate you.

          Damian

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      A Cryptic Sense of Doom

      A Cryptic Sense of Doom   Madness in the abyss of delusion yellow flashes of butts turn gray with haze of smoke rings scented mood candles veil the stench   Absurd chatter, blabber, bird gossip episodic giggles over fanatic demeanor bodies ubiquitous oily touches, sweaty chairs, foxy floors empty whiskey...

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      • Interesting write. I found it quite intriguing.

      • You painted a picture in perfect detail of places I once visited.
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      • You just nailed doom to this particular page .. enlightening all those passing through on the off chance and those intentionally visiting while simultaneously de-coding a significant percentage of what is left of mystery .. I’m glad I swung by this way Betty .. Warmly yours, Neville

      • Such a sad tale. Addictions kill and pull people into the gutter only to die. Your poem encapsulates the experience as though Satan were in the room with them.

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