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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Very true, totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those are amazing lyrics. Love it;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Still working on the music, especially the vocals. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian this is a very great song I can feel your pain❤
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Second stanza, first line, did you mean “you’re”?
The repetition really works. And the shield me stanza is so clever and just rolls off the tongue.
Good, good piece of writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jacob. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Yes, I did mean “you’re” nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Awesome! The rhymes and lyrics are infectious. Like an abscess in a tooth! Nice work dude!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It’s got music as well, though I’m still working on the music. I’ll let you check it out when it’s completed, nice to see you my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The interesting thing about this one is that, depending on how it’s read, it could be a woman or an addiction. Very clever use of words here, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Nice catch, you’re on the right path. It has a lot of meanings to me as well. This is the song I’m currently putting music to. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Can heat it already. Great work. Good luck on the solo album.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thank you, I need all the luck I can get. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some people shy away from a poem that’s composed of rhyme. I’ve always felt that there’s a finesse to it that has to be refined like a piece of art. You have that quality. It speaks volumes, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. What a lovely comment, so kind of you. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The lyrics are so lovely, I feel the intensity of the emotions…the push and pull, the thrill and the ache. and the repeated chorus of “sweet novocain” lingers like a haunting, addictive melody. I’d love to hear you sing this. It’s beautiful
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well vocally I’m doing my best, I’m not the greatest singer. lol. I’ll share the song when it’s complete. Thanks so much for your support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like that it has multiple meanings, I always dig those kind of writes. Bon Jovi style, that’s a unique way of putting it, but
I like it. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.Damian
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I sense there is more to this than presently meets the eye .. Good luck with production .. I suspect it will do well ..
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I will admit there are multiple meanings to this one. That’s the beauty of words, In my opinion. I need all the luck I can find, thanks for offering some. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My absolute pleasure ..
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“The rigor mortis of planes on runways.”
Quite creative imagery there and throughout.
The first stanza could even stand as a poem by itself.
“Ventriloquist placed your words in my mouth”I have none of my own any more as I am so taken by you.
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you’re too kind. thank you.
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Nice one, Damian. A beautiful women can put a man under a spell that makes him forget any pain.