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      Glitch

      I often think I am a glitch in the systemI have feelings I should not haveWhat does this worldWith cold cold starsWith cold cold logicCare about my feelings.

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      • IDK, the world doesn’t care about any of us. It just keep rolling along. Don’t you think it is up to us to care about feelings? About the feelings of others, about how we relate to the world, all life, and the people who inhabit it? In this sense, you are not a “glitch” but an integral part of everything around you.

        I realize this is one part of a larger story (Chapter 17) and I have not as yet read all the chapters, so my comment may be way off base. If so forgive me. But I personally think we all are like stones cast on calm water and the ripples we leave affect the world around us. So, we are all “glitches”. Besides, Amethyste as a crystal is a warm calming stone so those feelings may be some warmth cast into this cold, cold, cold world.

        Thanks for your chapter, hope I didn’t over step.
        -Curt

      • Only a human cares about other human feelings. We make our own distracted universe. But it is isolated.

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      Rubik's Cube Requiem for Lost Love

      Held as grenade  coloured fingerprints  from a love crime scene, Darling, Night Arrived without you  Turning memory until wrist snapped, one man solved the cube in three seconds but for others, decades play dice with never-ending seasons  Red was the seductive flame of her dress kindle...

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      • you are a master writer so full of passion makes me long to know you ❤️

      • Raw and unforgettable, this poem is an unfiltered outpouring of a messy, deeply-felt heartbreak.

        Grief, love, and memory twist together like the cube itself, and the striking imagery -from the “petrol pirouette” to the painful truth that “yellow bleeding into orange doesn’t always promise a sunset” perfectly captures that internal chaos.

        The frustration of the Rubik’s Cube beautifully reflects the struggle to reconcile a beautiful memory with the painful reality of loss and betrayal.

        I love it. It’s brilliant and beautifully written.

        • Wow RomaJ ,you have a job as the editor of my never to be published poetry collection. Not that I have any desire to be published. It’s enough to know my words have touched the soul of one across the Atlantic. It was a task to compress my train-crash love life into one poem. Diolch.

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