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Read Morewith culted bane I speak profaneobscure morose, masturbating my insanitydilligently scribing my death daystime spent in the company of demonstalking to the world through a fogno one to tell, no one believes meon specters and ghostsfaulty little imperfection I...
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I would not be afraid to know the worst of you. Some well put together. 🖤💜
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thank you dearest Jim no one but God ever see the worst of me…I keep a reign over myself the best I can… I am dark ❤️I appreciate your thoughts…
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excellent write
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thank you graciously dearest poet I see you changed your pen name ❤️
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It happens sometimes, I guess. I’ve been erected, it’s nice. lol :))
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🙂 🙂
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The title alone is gonna draw reads, but it seems like a great series, good luck
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Thank you. I rarely write on this theme. But I am glad I managed to write it long time ago, for whom partner I do not remember. It must have been one of them. 🙂
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Oh my! I been think this for some time. Whoever it may have been – was lucky.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Marvelous. Nice work.
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Thank you a lot. I appreciate it.
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post
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Read Moreis meant to undolike skin peeling away from time,like a name dissolving in the mouth. not to be readthe instant the gaze tries to fix it,but fails—gloriously. before it undoes itself, it is already noise,it is already absence,it is already the...
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write per usual my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian!!! Thanks.
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Paulo!! How are you? Marvelous piece of writing. Your poetry always keep me thinking & wondering, while I balance on the edge of my mind.
Peace!
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Insanity!!! Thanks.
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The ending is a rock through a window! No peaceful moment within this write. It has an edge throughout. Impactful.
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Styxian!!! Thanks.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Hi, TFT! I welcome you to “BACK TO POETRY BASICS”, and would like to invite you to join-in on our Sonnet lesson (two posts below). It’s easy: just read and follow along. I look forward to sharing with you. ⁓ Richard🖌