Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!

Warm regards, Gus

and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!

An espresso con panna to you.
Clay

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Oooh, very clever!

Really like that ending, tight

Oh Hell his filling came out. It’s sad that he learned to lie so well. I am happy he did not teach anyone else to do it.

Ha, ha! Thanks for coming back to this, Fia. I am glad to have you read this. It is nothing special or important, but I think there are a few things that fall into those categories. This is certainly very different from any other of my works, and I am happy I got this story out.

It’s not for the Benedictine sandwich crowd but give me a Bud Light and beer nuts, and tickled my feel goods. Love it!

Unapologetically penned, PG. A very passionate write with seductive wordplay my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well written and quite exciting.
Mission accomplished PG you captured my attention from go to woe.
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☺️ thank you Fia, always appreciate your feedback.

xx

“I do not love mundane” Yes, Gawdess! You kept me in it from the beginning to the end

Straight to the point with sass, Tight

HJ thank you!! Always a pleasure. xx