Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!

The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.

Well phrased battle of wills 🌼

Great flow and a very smart human, to tight

Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…

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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!

Daniel

Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!

Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian;))

Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.

Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.

Digging the ethereal feeling in this. Hope you’re doing well sir.
Nicely penned.

The poems are starting to appear in my brain jar again Wally

She gives me a lot to write about…

Stay tuned Wally

Hope all is good on your side !!

hello dearest Poet you are so sexy when you are being beautiful it’s great to see you ❤️

I don’t come here often Brenda but once in awhile a poem will come to me and I pen it. Sometimes I get excited that I actually wrote something again. On DUP they came fast and furious but now I have to wait for the magic to appear.

Appreciate your comment Brenda.
You’re so sweet
Thanks

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Beautifully penned, Speak. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

The desire to write happens occasionally now and I’m grateful for it ..

Thx D

Listen to the messages. Keep writing. I enjoy it

Would’ve loved some of your artwork along with this piece, we’re all missing boxhead. Tight

Yeah, boxhead needs to get it together.
They’re comfortably numb and living the good life while their Master is working hard …

Thx Me

Stay tuned

Speak! Poet! Poetspeak, another great write. So nice to read something of yours again. Hold on to that inspo, it’s working in or favor. 😉

xx

Dear H,

It’s just a change of scenery and site but somehow it didn’t translate like that.
At DUP my mind was always ablaze but here it’s a tug and pull.
Still I try
When the notion comes I write it fast and edit later ….

So nice to see you H

I hope you’re well !!

X

G

It’d be my pleasure. xx