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      Burnout

      Burnt out before I began  Died three times and  Here I am  And why should I cry for you 

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    • Monster

      Teeth bared
      He’s scared
      His mind’s a mess
      Trying to handle with finesse
      But to no avail-this ship has sailed
      If it was meant to be-he will return to me

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      • A laudable effort, Fia 👍
        I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
        Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
        1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More

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      (My poem for the picture)

      No meaning

      I sit here thinking
      Life has little meaning
      Once I lived in luxury
      Now I live in memory
      What is the meaning of my life?
      Smoke coming from my pipe has more meaning

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      Shadow Surgery of Love (Character Personality Collaboration)

      CasketSharpe             “During childhood years sex was forbidden like touching a hot flame Now after a woman’s first experience she will never be the same,             “Legs raised in the air like cigarette smoke Sometimes before swallowing a hard dick that made her...

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      • This is so sad, and the fact that she cheated and gave an STD.It left a gaping wound that would never heal

        • It could be almost the same as a cheating man giving a woman a STD or getting another woman pregnant.

      • Both pieces tight and about being done dirty, and delivering retribution. We love the versatility of the pieces, to wild dude

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      Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art

      Hi, I just wanted to start off by saying thank you for joining. A singer that stuck in my mind, and I thought I would talk about is Toni Basil. She sang this song, “Mickey,” That came out in 1982and I could not get it out of my head as a kid. It’s funny how when I listen to the song as an adult, I get the meaning, but as a child, I was like…Read More

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      • There are a lot of songs out there that as a kid, I didn’t always get the meaning of until later in life. I remember the song well though. I was 7 years old when this came out. So I didn’t get the meaning at that age either. But the cheerleader outfit made sense, the lyrics are sang as if it is a cheer routine, with the handclaps also giving it…Read More

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