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      Back from War

      Barbarous and 19I left for the warHunting insergants From door to door We gave all we hadThe sniper had more My friend screamed for his motherFrom the hot desert floor Id had enoughIt wasn't for me On my way homeHit an I.E.D Woke up from...

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      • The atrocities of war felt by everyone

      • Powerfully penned, James. Another excellent write about the horrors of war my friend. The casualties are not just the ones who lose their life in battle. It’s returning soldiers and their families that carry those scars as well. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • Thanks for reading. Generations of damaged people. War is not what people want. Presidents and premiers choose it for us.
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          James

      • I can speak from experience. Many times the civilians are truly the major suffering. They didn’t sign up for any of it. I’ve seen enough back in my days that I learned what a crock of shit most of it really is. Politicians and profits and land grabs.
        Great write, Knight. You don’t have to be a Veteran (or active military) to understand the plight of so many.
        Well spoken.

      • Thanks for reading and comenting. Only billionaires and politician win wars. Everyone else looses.

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      Outside

      In a cage Struggling To get outHelplessBlind to the factA BirdWithout his mindOutsideWould not surviveTo and froHe flewLookingAt the blue skyLooking For the lightNot noticingThe deadly groundsWith all its houndsHe had heardOnceAbout the outsideAbout freedomAbout the past He fought To reach outTo reach That promised...

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      • Why wouldn’t he last? Being on his own for too long?

        • You are asking a 14 year old boy such difficult questions…. Remember I wrote this when I was merely 14… after so many years I still do not have an answer

      • Intense read. I feel it.
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        James

      • A tender, tragic truth about wanting freedom before you’re ready to bear its weight. Thought-provoking writing from a 14-year-old boy, Sam. Hope you’re having a lovely day. 🙂

        • no unfortunately I’m not 14 years old anymore…. although I would not want to be… wasn’t a good time for me then… as you can feel from this poem I wrote when I was 14… but thank you for your comment Ms. Grace

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      Where One Begins

      Come close,   beneath your nearness and the warmth of my skin, until neither of us knows where one begins.   Your mouth finds my neck, then pauses there, a whisper of heat caught softly in air.   I feel your restraint before I feel your hand, the softest tension I can barely withstand.   It...

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      • ooo… this is good … very sensual and intense

        • Thank you, Sam. I’m glad the sensuality and intensity came through. Sometimes a little mystery makes the journey all the more interesting. 😉

      • Chère G.,
        Come close, a better and more inviting intro has not be written so far.
        What a beauty you’ve made.

        And the final four sentences are the cherry on the cake.
        Love it to bits!
        Warm regards, Gus

      • Gus, what a lovely thing to say. I’m so glad the opening drew you in, and the ending stayed with you. Thank you for reading so thoughtfully and for your wonderfully warm words. 🙂

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      Stitches of the Soul (Halloween Night of the Dark Joy)

           “His creations of fabric were from a time long ago lostWith a lifetime of memories that demanded a terrible cost,     “Some with wonderful pleasure-others blacker than the nightBut to Jim Hallow his clothing were neither wrong...

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