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Amethyste wrote a new post

• 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Whisky

Poetry

April 27, 2026

7

I wish I was your bottle of whiskySo that being a heavy drinker you areYou would consume me every time She says she wants to be consumedBut I dare not drink her Because I am already doomedMaybe she was intrigued by...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Well Damn what a piece here. Love it. great collab
  - Amethyste
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you a lot Fia.
- Amethyste
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thank you Crimsin. I appreciate it a lot.
- Damian DeadLove
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent collaboration my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Amethyste
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Damian.
  - Amethyste
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you. I appreciate it.
Broom wrote a new post

• 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Golden Quill

Poetry

April 27, 2026

4

If I had a quill made of goldthat wrote of stories, new and oldcreate new dreams and fairytaleson pages carried by silver sails sketch bright flowers with bumblebeesor babbling brooks with autumn leaveswrite of sorrow pain and griefor paint a...

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2 Comments
- Christopher
  4 months ago
  
  Love this poem.. it’s elegant and sensual !! Well written!
- Daniel Long
  2 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Absolutely loved this! The first stanza especially.
  
  D.
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• 4 months, 2 weeks ago

look at me

Poetry

April 27, 2026

2

nonot that versionnot that onenot the pieces stitched togetherouta all the thingsyou needed me to be look at mehold it theredon’t let your eyes slide offdon’t try to soften the edges so you can keep your image of me see me little...

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2 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I felt one word “intense” Good piece
- Damian DeadLove
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post

• 4 months, 2 weeks ago

April 27th - Down, Up, Along, As If Tomorrow Didn’t Exist

Poetry

April 27, 2026

4

April 27th beginsdown the stairs,all the way long,each step a small surrender,each landing a brief negotiationbetween gravity and will. It is a descentthat feels older than you,a movement inheritedfrom every fallyou’ve ever survived. But the day does not stay low.It never...

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4 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  That last stanza
  “And by the time it ends,
  you realize:
  you have traveled
  farther inside yourself
  than any map
  could ever show.”
  Par man that is gold
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks my dear. 🌻
- Damian DeadLove
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  “And by the time it ends,
  you realize:
  you have traveled
  farther inside yourself
  than any map
  could ever show.”
  
  Brilliantly penned, PAR. Another excellent write (day) my friend. This one is definitely all about the miles traveled, journeys tend to do that it seems. Amazing read with precise imagery brother, I could picture the surroundings especially the highway. Nicely done as always. That last stanza was chef’s kiss. I concur with Fia. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks, my Brother!
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