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Read MoreI'm living on an excuseThe night destroys meSo much of nothing racing through my mindI lie to continue each dayNo one knows what I mean but meIf you were to hold my hand,There would be no emotion, no warmthThere's...
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I’m not sure if I would enter anyone’s prison. I don’t want to enter my own! Thanks Fia for the awesome comment.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Some questions have complicated answers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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They sure do. Thanks Damian.
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Simple pleasures, and small feats. Great write Peter. xx
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Beautifully penned, Peter. It’s the little things. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian and PG….it’s a long day without a cup of tea, so get in early.No.matter what my mood a piping hot cuppa moves it for a while.
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Hoi hoi Peter,
That’s a qualitea poem. Hats off.
Love it a lot. Leave it up to me to murder your language.If you are American: Thank you!
In all other cases: keep ‘em coming, please.Kind regards, Gus
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Thanks Gus and no I’m not American… Australian.
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Tragic, painful, sadness. This poem has so much hurt but brilliantly written Brenda. Great!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good evening dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one tugs at the heartstrings my friend. I can feel the hurt in your words. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously for feeling me on this ❤️
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With lost things can never be the same, but you can still move forward. Sad piece Lady
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Me I always appreciate when you visit me thank you ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You paint this scene well.
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dark, delectable, demonic, dirtily dished-out-damnation of the damsel’s sexual soul – I loved it, Crimsin! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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hello lovely poetess I absolutely loved your review of this poem ❤️thank you graciously…
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you’re welcome, Crimsin – I was only describing how it felt as your avid reader!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dark poem and interesting end question. Would you enter if I were to lock you in my prison? We all have our own prisons at some point in time. to enter someone else’s is …would be difficult. Good piece.