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Read MoreI Kissed A Girl (many times)...I kissed a girl and I liked it!Stop right there! Hey, Katy Perry...there was no cherry chapstick!This is about me - not you!We met in the ladies room...you may have heard a story.I wear...
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I accidentally posted this same submission under A Squirrel. It was pointed out to me and after figuring out how to edit – the right one is up now.
I get loopy sometimes. I keep copies and cut and paste. It went bonkers, but it is corrected.
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Read MoreMoonlit screams as they ripple the air from the grave of a girl. Moonlit corpse as she appears through a blanket of mist. Moonlit ghost as in life, she’s lost, angry, whispers secrets. Candlelit giggles as she’s in the flesh her glinting emerald eyes....
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I love the focus you have on the light either the moon or the candle. Enjoyed this
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Incredible work, Fia. You’re one of a kind. :))))))
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Thank you, Tim ;))
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Kee up the good work Fia 💋
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Thank you, Backdeckbenny ;))
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Amazing work, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreOnly in candlelight can I see you. Only then can I lay eyes on your perfect form. Only then can the glinting emeralds in your eyes cast their spell on me. Only by the candle flame can I hear...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic!
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There’s a spiritual side to this I think you caught. Really creative writing here. Nice job!
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Das ist wirklich ein Meisterwerk, Daniel!
Like Tim, I appreciate the spiritual side of your writing. I understand the candlelight as a metaphor for our own inner light. The light in our hearts allows us to see other persons like they really are, beyond their appearance, social roles or status symbols. Brilliant!-
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Ein Meisterwerk? Awww, ich danke dir so sehr, Elke! Warten Sie bis zu diesem Wochenende, Sie werden in der Tat das Eröffnungskapitel zu einem Meisterwerk haben. Dass ich posten werde. Und dieses Gedicht hat mit den beiden Charakteren dieser Geschichte zu tun.
Thank you so much, Elke!Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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You’re amazing with your dialogue. Always enjoy your writing.