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    The Massage Therapist - Alayna

    I had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....

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    • I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx

      • More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.

        • I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx

    • Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.

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    Invitation

    My skin hurts. It feels like they're ripping it off my bones—sliver by sliver. I can't scream anymore. My voice left me an hour after they started. They said that once it's done, I'll be a changed person. Yeah,...

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    I’m Breathing

    I'm breathing Can you hear me I'm being advised from beyond No Not Ai I'm getting messages Telling me to write you The engines lost power We're gliding It's beautiful above the clouds Serene Magical I don't think much when I write you It's instinct That's what I work on I'm getting messages telling...

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    • Digging the ethereal feeling in this. Hope you’re doing well sir.
      Nicely penned.

    • The poems are starting to appear in my brain jar again Wally

      She gives me a lot to write about…

      Stay tuned Wally

      Hope all is good on your side !!

    • hello dearest Poet you are so sexy when you are being beautiful it’s great to see you ❤️

    • I don’t come here often Brenda but once in awhile a poem will come to me and I pen it. Sometimes I get excited that I actually wrote something again. On DUP they came fast and furious but now I have to wait for the magic to appear.

      Appreciate your comment Brenda.
      You’re so sweet
      Thanks

      ❤️

    • Beautifully penned, Speak. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • The desire to write happens occasionally now and I’m grateful for it ..

      Thx D

    • Listen to the messages. Keep writing. I enjoy it

    • Would’ve loved some of your artwork along with this piece, we’re all missing boxhead. Tight

    • Yeah, boxhead needs to get it together.
      They’re comfortably numb and living the good life while their Master is working hard …

      Thx Me

      Stay tuned

    • Dear PS,

      I feel ya on the process of writing since DU. I enjoyed this romantic side and ride. So glad your muse has spoken.
      H🌷

      • Dear H,

        It’s just a change of scenery and site but somehow it didn’t translate like that.
        At DUP my mind was always ablaze but here it’s a tug and pull.
        Still I try
        When the notion comes I write it fast and edit later ….

        So nice to see you H

        I hope you’re well !!

        X

        G

    • Speak! Poet! Poetspeak, another great write. So nice to read something of yours again. Hold on to that inspo, it’s working in or favor. 😉

      xx

    • It’d be my pleasure. xx

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    Love As Ruin

    There was a time when the wax streamed from our hot flame.   There was a time when our fire was a spark, then passion caught flame.   There was a time when the flame light burned like hellfire.   We burned on like candlelight until we were...

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    Our Soul-Light

    As our wax burns and drips down - our time is lost.   We both need darkness to see our flame - our soul-light.   We both need wind to see our flame's flickering persistence.   We both need ruins to see our flame illuminate a world -   which you...

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