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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Read MoreHeaven can wait…Death a distant thunderstormwith lightning strikes far offannouncing its distant presence.Suicide is not the answer.I do not want to hurtthose that show compassion.So, I’ve decided Heaven can wait.
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This is awesome Daniel…
Such creative format…
Clever use of ellipsis
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Will do! Haha
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Read MoreCommunity- Comradery - CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it, can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is subjective to the interpretation...
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Read MoreThere is a soothing storm within. Gently, thunder booms from my heart.Gentle heartbeats make emotional wavesand I cannot stop my feelings for her.There is a teary deluge within.My tears, the wine of my loneliness,which intoxicates me until I’m love-struckand...
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!