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Read MoreWith cold dead hands,a ghost I amto you alone now.With cold dead handsthat are unseen,unfelt, and unanticipated.With cold dead hands,my visits unknown to youmaking you shiver,and lips embalmed in ice.With cold dead hands,I will call on youto feel your...
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Lyrics of wisdom…
Check spelling on ‘strength’ first line and ‘through’ in the 3rd stanza.
Your meter for this piece is strong, the primary poetic element. It is assertive and authoritative.-
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Thank you for correcting the spelling! I appreciate it ⚘️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. This was a wise and uplifting read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian⚘️
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💜⚘️
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An insightful write! Well done “)
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Thank you for your kind words! ⚘️
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Great insight. Totally diggin this vibe
Naaj
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Thank you kindly ⚘️
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Read MoreDeath shall have a dominion.Dawn’s birth to day’s life,Dusk’s decay to the death of night:Tis’ not our mortal decision.Youth’s innocent juvenility,Vitality’s vibrancy,The elegantly decaying morbidity,A corpse in the clay of its grave perishing –The funeral of darkness at moonset.Morning’s...
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Read MoreIn archaic lore, bold spiders rise and fall.Her web woven in flamboyance, then at her leisure, she feasts each day on fools she tempted as her prey. So, it was the end of the moth. Her delicate wings flailed, she...
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Read MoreI have grieved your absence longer than I've enjoyed your presence Yet every detail of your essence is meticulously engraved in each cell of my body.Our connection is so strong , I still feel the flow of your soul through...
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Pain is a universal emotion to be cherished.
A language we feel, yet speak not one word of.It’s beautiful really.
Just like your words.
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We learn a lot from pain and suffering.
Thank you for your kind comment! ⚘️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. A nice read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ⚘️
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Pain is physical….. suffering is mental.
Let suffering go, not easy, but you’re the one hurting yourself.
Very powerfully and intelligently crafted piece.🙏
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You are correct, pain eventually goes away. Suffering can take a lifetime to heal…
Thank you for the comment Peter ⚘️
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(check spelling on ‘through’ 3rd sentence)
So, the first line of this poem is captivating and sets the tone. It could almost be a poem unto itself. I like how you explore this relationship for the reader, the feelings and dissolved expectations… the emptiness left and the questions we never want to be answered.
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Haha you can tell my first language isn’t English. I will correct that…
Thank you for the comments.⚘️
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Thank you kindly for the comment, I just was able to let go, after 10 years….🫣⚘️
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Cheers! 😅
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Lovely poem! Very deep message.