I like how you ask for forgiveness . Nice Daniel. 😊

Powerfully penned, Daniel. I could feel this one my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a great musing, always dig the musings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian. 😊
Chocolate wine strokes again. My friend

Those hands should go to jail!!

I think we all hope to be remembered by those we interact with. Maybe keep a part of us alive. Great ink

Great! Last line brings it home. Nice work Fia..xo

Thank you, Hamid. I appreciate you saying that;))

Forgotten memories that echo, washed away in the dark froth, staring. Fia, this poem is almost like what I write hahahaha. It short, the imagery, delivers a quick punch 👊 👏 the way poetry should be! Bravo!