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    Some of you are having an issue commenting on poems. We are currently working on it. You can still post your work and use personal messaging.I do apologize for this

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    Being the Strong One

    I never wished to be the strongest all the time.You ever think I had other things on my mind?The peace that I’m giving you, is a piece from me …seldom’s left any peace for my serenity.I wonder if you...

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    • Musing can often bring out true feelings underneath. Whether real or made up, this dialog in rhyme takes the reader from beginning to end with a story many may share as their own. I’m sure the ladies on the site may find this relatable…and maybe a few men to.

      Always an interesting write from you, Fia.

      • Thank you, Tim. If someone feels something from this piece that would make me happy. appreciate the comment.

    • Your poems always brings some form of knowledge if one can really understand.

    • Oh….this piece is wonderful.

      Being strong yet still soft enough to be loved is a tough gig.
      💋

    • hello beautiful Fia I’ve known many powerful women in my life and sometimes they would confide in me and my instinct was to want to hug that person this woman I knew it took a long time before she let me hug her…I don’t think many people got her but I loved her…sometimes it wasn’t that she wasn’t seen but her ferocity was intimidating beautiful but frightening at times so much so I thought I might be consumed by her pain I hope you have someone you don’t always have to be the strong one with hugs… Brenda 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I always like your musings my friend, this one has layers. Sometimes even the strongest person, needs to be held and reassured. Amazing spill. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Support Team!

    • Yes I get this.
      Strong people get overloaded with other peoples weight at times. I think whether we are strong or weak we need each other. And some times it’s alright for strong people to tell the ones that rely on them to wind their neck in.

      Regards James

    • You are so right, thank you ❤️

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    Upon My Death…

    Upon my death…   I will ascend one foot to heaven and stubbornly descend one to Hell. I care not what God has to say! I care what death will mean for my life’s work, not my soul.   Upon my death…   I will be...

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    • hello dearest Daniel this is really good…darkness and light I’m afraid are one… in the lowest depths of hell God is there also not as religion preaches but there none the less 💕

      • Love your comments, Brenda. Darkness and light coexist, indeed. Religion is so fun to play with creatively! Thank you!

        Daniel

    • Heavy fucking write, Daniel. Very powerful my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thanks as always, Damian! Heavy fucking write and powerful, indeed! I was once told by a wise man, also a writer, who said to me, “Whatever it is you write down, make it goddamn prophetic!” I’ve always kept that in mind over the years and the more I remember it, the better my writing becomes. True story…

        Daniel
        Gothic-Surrealist

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    Bad Breakup

    I knew it was over… the day your hand lay lifeless in mine. That sudden goodbye and that iciness you shared. Glares… not beautiful gazes. Sharing hands with a corpse then made it a wintry day. It was a shimmering...

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    • Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the weight of this write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Your poem is so beautiful and sad, Daniel!
      ‘Sharing hands with a corpse’. This speaks volumes, and cuts like a knife. As always, your work is beautifully written with a masterful use of imagery, brilliant!

      • Ja, ich schreibe wunderschön mit einer meisterhaften Verwendung von Bildern, Elke. Ich denke gerne, dass meine Arbeit brillant ist, aber ich weiß noch nicht, ob ich ein Meisterautor bin. Nächstes Jahr werde ich einen fertigen Roman haben und ich bin nervös. Hahahaha!

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    My Gothic Candle Flame

    That teardrop shape of my light! A glow with many shadows cast. The vaulted heavens above catch the long thread of smoke rising when my candle flame’s pinched. My smoke pools and condenses as my blackened wick cools. The teary streams of wax dry and my tears...

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