wowee dearest Adagio this is so masterfully written I love it a thing of perfection ❤️

Powerfully penned, Adagio. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a very beautiful and meaningful poem with rich imagery and brilliant wording, dear Adagio. Every season holds its own beauty! Most people appreciate only autumn’s colorful farewell. But in all its tristesse, the grey, rainy and foggy days, autumn demonstrates how to die with grace, knowing that without its dying there would be no rebirth within the circle of life in nature. Great work!

Thank you, Sappho.

I enjoyed the absence of light in this write. How for some it’s befitting.
You expressed that feeling throughout this piece.
Nice work.

Thank you, Adelphina.

Tough pain can do this, mental disorderes can do this… All I can feel is someone who is trapped inside their mind, there is nothing and no one only them and their mind. You did great with expressing and delivering the emptyness and numbness. I very much like the title, it’s perfect.