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Read Moredriven insaneblue and greysleek bodycobra grillheadlightscutting nightsengine roarsdual pipes wheels rollchrome artdescribingintricate fleshfingeringher six speedclutchingthat lust horsepowerequalsfrictionloving torquesport bodyinvitingthe curvestop down road readysoft highwaydrag stripstarting linemy mustangyour corvettewe embraceunique styles Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2019
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are welcome my friend 😊
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Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreHis mind became my closet, listening to all the acrimonious BS, at the Pentecostal show, By the laying his hands on my pillow case at 3 am—somehow the scent of bourbon and Cheetos linger. He pulled his pecker too many...
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Read MoreConsorts, walking the mausoleums at dusk—boots clicking against the cobbles where the dead have voices conversing with the granite, each stone a magnetof breathless secrets to honor infamy when one erases history, listening to theechoing of California fornication, riding...
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Read MoreFound her on the slab, still singing—voice box humming through formaldehyde,her tongue, a pink oyster of restless fellatiotapping code the way ii tasted,sweet caviar as the scalpel crossed—"Cut me loose," sweet scent homicide.
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An exellent write! Smells like Sweet Scent Homicide.
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Thank you.
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Read MoreFrom the bark of a sequestered oak,my tome-shanty, my wares,I never laid claimed to be a synonymor any other glamor to fame,by writing perfect words.Just a bookshop keeper with a mellow heartand a bobbin for a mind, spinning prose,poetic...
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The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack