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Read MoreStill Cold Under The CoatOh’ my love,how I must have changedsince we last failed and so conspicuously ..You neverfaltered though or pausednor turnedaround for a final backward glance did you ..Oh’ and neither did you dropeither of thoseelegant gloves...
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Thank you kindly Damian 😎👍
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Tremendous work.
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Good of you to stop by Thomas .. Cheers, Neville 😎👍
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Could feel the hurt in your words my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An awesome, bittersweet and heart touching poem, dear Crimsin! Brilliantly written!
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Most excellent, my friend. Keep on touching my heart.
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How is it fair to find the perfect one so long after finding your one true love, is it fate showing a sense of humor, Tight
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Brilliant
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Beautiful. Only you can write these sad pieces with such delicate precision.
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Read More© 2025 I noticed that "Blae-Lok" was speaking much better now, better than before, and I thought, "I wonder if ..." Just then, Blae-Lok’s “wife” stirred, shook her head and glanced up at me. She started buzzing loudly while...
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Read More© 2025This Prologue tells the absolute truth. What comes after is, well, not so much "truth," as it is ... um, what could come, perhaps. There IS hope that this "Secret" could lead to some happy truth. But Truth,...
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Read MoreRandom Thoughts About You I. The blood streaked across my eye pooling into a pencil point, but acting like it wanted to fight. Instead, it faded, then said goodbye, As you walked out the door. II. The wind whipped across the deck like it was in a hurry...
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hello dearest poet I feel you on this interesting note my children are Aztec as was my ex…he is registered with tribe I never registered my children…I feel for your pain ❤️
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Thank you for visiting Crimsin. One of my long ago ancestors was part of the Native American tribe that inhabited Manhattan when the Dutch arrived. May I ask why you never registered your children as Aztec and into the tribe? Are you Native American?
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no I’m not Native American my ex was we don’t know where he currently is he wanted to register them when they were little but we didn’t do it now the kids need their day to register or go through a lot of red tape as there are large somes of money invoved…they are not asking for that just to be recognized…
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Profound pain does this… when nature seems to reflect all your feelings and You also can’t enjoy anything of it. it’s like two opposite things, the nurture sharing your pains and nature is also going against You. “Random Thoughts About You” is a perfect title, the shattered mind and heart… one thought here, another there, one feeling is here another there… perfect song too, I love Kim Wild version of it. written well with feelings of numbness and emptyness being expressed and delivered clearly. Peace 🕊️ and happiness 💕 my friend.
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Hi Light. I appreciate your comment. I remember Kim Wilde’s version of this song. A more “upbeat” style. While I do like the Vanilla Fudge version, my favorite is still the Supremes’ original. Their version is also more upbeat compared to Vanilla Fudge. Anyway, thanks again for your kind review.
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I share your pain .. but then, I doubt you will be surprised .. nevertheless I am glad I came by this way .. you just helped me make more sense of myself and my world so ya did .. Wishing you well is becoming a reflex my friend .. kindest regards, Neville 👍👍
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Hey there Neville, you are always welcome to walk through my poems. I am glad that this one helped you “make sense of your world, and yourself”. Perhaps now you could shed some light on my jumbled mess. 😕
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Powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas
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Ms. Mary, what a treat to have you comment on one of my poems. So, you think I’m organized, huh? Not if you saw my notebooks. 🤔😂 But I want to make a deal: I’ll be good to me, if you’ll be good to you. 🌹
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Beautifully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian