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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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You are without a doubt, the Queen of Darkness & Lust. Your pen, weaves magic and this piece is no exception. I love everything you’ve written here, you know I do.
Love you, Brenda
Your sister Jackie❤️-
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hello lovely Jackie thank you my sister for such a beautiful comment forgive my delayed response I went through a couple down days I cherish you 💕
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hello beautiful Mary yes it is this is poetic lust which is intoxicating I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYour inconsistencies are consistentHappy yet state your sadAngry but seem to be gladRelaxed but wound tightWant to be gentle yet you biteNo one understandsNo one took the timeNo one gave a shitAlways left behindWeeping from rageSpilling into the calm...
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Intriguing…
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Thank you, willow
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I like the contrast you used in some verses. Dark thoughts indeed. Well done, Fia!
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Thank you, M.E appreciate that
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. was in the zone.
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Thank you, Adira;))
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Fantatic!
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Thank you, Adagio
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G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️
Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🖌-
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Thank you so much for the compliment and comment. Richard I appreciate it
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Oh, sure thing, Fia!
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Yes, it has been changed. Ty ;))
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You misunderstood, Fia … I meant to change L4 to “there”. Not L2, which was fine as “despair”.
So “despair” and “there” rhyme.
(like this)
Still, you find me in your dreams
Wake, wake from this despair
It is me you’re talking to
No one else is there.
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Very captivating.
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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Thank you, Steven;))
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Love is like a Cossack sword dance. Reflex and intuition combined with lethal beauty. 🌼
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hello dearest Joe indeed it is thank you graciously for your thoughts 💕
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A well written piece! “)
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thank you dearest Me good evening 💕
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you kind soul have a beautiful evening 💕
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I agree this is beautifully penned.
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good afternoon beautiful Fia thank you graciously 💕
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Read Moreexalting your presence I breathe into youa deep sigh escapes mea fascination an obsession is my desire for youdo I dare confess?secret sin my covetess wantloosing myself on the winds of fatewhispering an enchantment so you will feel mesacred...
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Always ready with the siren song of temptation. Well done my friend 🌼
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hello dearest Joe good evening you know you inspired me thank you 💕
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If I’m inspiring you we both might be in trouble! 🌼
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yes we might be smiles 💕
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thank you graciously lovely poetess good evening 💕
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Passionately penned, Brenda. A very seductive write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you my friend 💕
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Seductively penned, Brenda. Fantastic writing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian