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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...
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Thank you, Tim;)) <3
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I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
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Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
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Thank you so much, Vision
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Read MoreFootsteps crackle of grass splintering of floorboards Falling through rocks footprints fading in the wet sand as we look back when that tide rushed in pictures in my mind your footprints left behind photos in old albums I see the many steps we took together The years we climbed those mountains of...
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Life can be a sad experience later in life. The loss of a spouse hurts so bad and memories become the new reality. This is well told, Julie.
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Hi thanks Tim it can be a spouse a partner a family member or indeed friends yes thanks so much I appreciate!
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Powerfully penned, Julie. Excellent imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much I appreciate
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This is excellent ink Julie .. the sadness that clearly and so eloquently flow throughout can be truly felt .. Kindest Regards, Neville
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Hi thanks very much Neville !
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The crackle, the falling, the fading footprints -this poem captures the fleeting passage of time and memory with such honesty and quiet, aching beauty.
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Oh wow thanks so much I appreciate
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Well written, Julie. Not too heavy and not fluff. It sets a wonderful tone and soothes the reader as they progress through it. Awesome results.
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This brought back many poignant memories, thank you.
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Read MoreLENNY'S BELTOnce upon a time...Paula got her ass beatby a thick leather belt.owned by stepdad Lenny.The pain was so bad thatI disassociated andbecame Bitch!Bitch cooks, cleans andthe laundry is alwayswashed, folded and ironed!Eventually Bitch makes atiny mistake and out...
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Wow! I’m speechless. With each write you’re revealing more and more scary info that keeps changing the full picture. I wish none of what happened to you existed.
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Thanks Tim! Me too.
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FUCK! Your stories captivate me. At the same time, you went through some heinous shit as a child.
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This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂