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    Is This Even Cohesive?

    It is I again. I’m just gonna say it out loud, folks. Respect the dead. Don’t use AI to see what they would look like had they lived to present day. First off, it’s kinda creepy. It’s just cringe...

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    • I agree… let the dead rest in peace … and let the living live in peace

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Sam. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I agree wholeheartedly with every word you said there. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Great reflections, Damian! You are absolutely right, we all should treat each other with respect, dead and living people alike. The past is gone and the future isn’t ours to see. We should live in the present moment and fill it with love, peace and new experiences. Life is short, let’s make the best of it for the sake of all living beings!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Sappho. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Absolutely, we should make the best of the time we’re here. Thanks so much for such great commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Famous dead celebrities are always resurrected. Big business my friend. Great write Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Yeah, I know everything reeks of Capitalism unfortunately. Everything is business, cut and dry, profit and loss. Wish we could change that, brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I’m with you here, Damian. It’s just plain wrong to use AI to bring back someone’s image. There’s so many heartbreaking stories out there about this. I call it necromancy, not art.
      I’m sure everyone has seen the guy whose family brought his image back to life in court to let it say it forgives the guy who murdered him. This is “Black Mirror” and it’s wrong.
      Thank you for bringing this to light.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree wholeheartedly, also thank you so much for such great commentary. I can see that, considering it necromancy, it sure as hell ain’t art. They do it with audio as well. Example: Using AI to make it sound like Freddie Mercury sang some song we know he never sung. This world has gone mad. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I told a close friend that AI is going to rewrite the social contract.
      This very articulate vent here hit the nail on the head as to what I meant
      Glad you shared this, Damian

      Much respect

      Naaj

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, AI rewriting the social contract. Corporations only care about the bottom line, tax cuts, and their corporate welfare. People get in the way of that. They want cheap labor, so they can acquire more wealth and power. Creative people annoy them, they don’t possess the gifts to create, and they don’t like paying the people who can. So, AI is there ticket to not having to deal with us pesky creative folks. Sorry, for continuing to rant, but you brought up a good point, and my mind just ran with it. Much respect. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • It is very cohesive. People put too much energy in re-writing the past instead of focussing in influencing the future for the greater good…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jade. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You hit the nail on the head, always wanting to rewrite the past. Especially our Government. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I love the rants, and I agree it is creepy to see them. Just let it be. Stress from work, life and lack sleep will march across your face quick. No need to use filters to see how you would age. Nice one, Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Ain’t that the truth. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I sometimes read your writing & get the sense I’m reading the manuscript of an oracle. You say uncohesive, I see fluid & dead accurate…pardon the pun. I have a debate with my roommate who is mildly obsessed with AI over the use of it. I use it to turn my writing into music because I lack musical skills. But while I have more that 200 in my personal playlist, they’re for me & I share very few. Because if I could create the music myself, that would be the only route I’d use. With my daughter rocking vocals…that girl! Trust me, my friend, it’s very cohesive

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, I try to stay on point, but my mind just grabs on to multiple directions sometimes. Must be the Pisces in me. lol. Nothing wrong with using AI for fun or like you did to put your words to music, because you can’t write music. Nobody understands that any better than me my friend. In the songwriting duo, I was lyrics, I needed Joey G to pull the ideas out of me musically, that was the only way I ever got music ideas out. Or I’m good on GarageBand, because I’m decent at arranging music and song structure. So I need help as well my friend. Your daughter was singing on that song you posted?? Always enjoy your commentary my friend, you make me ponder, which is cool. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    beloved

    you will always be a part of mea fiery passionate soulsometimes disturbed by the pain but you could lighten the heaviest momentsmy sadness glaresthen fades thinking of your smilethen cry when I think of your fightthere is a hole...

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    • You take your grief and spill it into a poem of great remembrance and timeless ache for this soul who apparently left this earth all too soon. Lyrically beautiful and soulful vision of what he meant to you and how you heal from loss. Love this poem.

      John

      • hello dearest John thank you he was a part my heart and he was so young to go he will be missed 💕

    • Your poetry captures so much in just a few stanza’s. Your words are beautiful and heartbreaking. Nice tribute to your son Brenda. xoxo

    • What a beautifully expressed tribute, Brenda

      Much respect

      Naaj

      • hello dearest Naajir you would have liked him I believe he was a lot of fun thank you for the love 💕

    • I feel this one in my bones…As a mom, I know dam well that no amount of writing can take away the pain…Having that said, this is beautifully written and it gives hope that while appart, you are still connected…
      Jade xox

      • hello beautiful Jade thank you for the love here no writing is a help but I fear the emotions that keep rising 💕

    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely tribute my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian thank you for the love 💕 it’s appreciated…

    • Write it out, Brenda. You honor him with your love. Write it out ❤️

      • hello beautiful Willow thank you for the love I feel like he doesn’t want me to be sad and I want to write and I did today but I know no matter what write the sadness is going to come forth I deeply appreciate you 💕

    • We all are connected to those who leave us in death.
      I still feel my father on my shoulder when I need guidance and my mom was right about everything. Both gone, but live in my heart.

      Your son will always be with you.
      He had a beautiful smile.

      Condolences and remembrances Brenda

      I feel you

      🖤💙💓🤠

      • hello dearest Poet good morning I think so too that we are connected I can hear him talking to me and I feel him close he is on to a new life but doesn’t want me to be sad thank you for the love here 💕

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    Butterball Hotline

    Caller: “Hello?” 119 Operator: “Hello! Happy holidays and thank you for choosing Butterball Turkey! What’s your emergency?” Caller: “Why would you think there’s an emergency?” Operator: “It’s Christmas Eve, sir. Why else would you be calling a turkey company?” Caller: “Well, you’re so...

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    • You’re one hell of a writer, DK. Brilliantly penned, the dialogue was incredible, enjoyed your witty sense of humor. And of course the temperature rising seductive elements are incredible my friend. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • LOL! Thank you, Damian! You feel like a cook to me. I bet you’ve got some amazing culinary experiences.

    • Holy Shit! This was a loooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnng piece. WOW! My 20 minutes are gone but I don’t care. This story was entertaining as FUCK! One hell of a job constructing this write DK. The pictures fit perfectly and are delicious! Especially the last one. I’m wondering if that’s Kristi Noem (former South Dakota Governor) in the first picture. Yum!

      • It took you 20 minutes to read this? What exactly were you doing, Keith? Yes, I want details. Stop blushing and spill it. Okay, I used to be governor of South Dakota, but I had to get out of there. My nipples nearly froze off. So, I moved to Mississippi. It’s hot as a turkey in the oven down here.

    • Tremendous. Creative beyond words. Excellent.

      • Thank you so much, Thomas. You and I need to exchange some recipes. I’ll let you lick the spoon.
        xoxo

    • This is a riot of erotic and humorous story telling. You have the gift with the dialogue that got my mercury rising indeed. Truly a fabulously naughty romp from kitchen to delivery room. Wildly wonderful. From cranberry to bottom this took me there and then some.

      John

    • Thank you, HJ! Thanks for coming to dinner!

      xoxo

    • Kept me reading from pure curiosity. The rump didn’t disappoint though haha. Great ink.

    • Yeah, all this to invite you to Thanksgiving!

    • Only if I can lick your cranberry…
      xoxo

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    One Night Stand

    AWAKEAbandoned hesitationEarly morning copulationI dig my nails into the sheets The mattress squeaksYou stretch my coreas undulations reach their peakand leave me begging you for moreMy bra and panties on the floorplay hide and seekbeyond the dooras if they've seen...

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    • It’s haunting and intoxicating.

    • This poem has both great depth of emotion about the man whose wife gazes on in the form of a picture and the sizzling sensual story. Truly a masterwork of erotic poetry. You have a fantastic ability to convey the feelings and scene letting me see it as though I were sitting in a corner watching.

      John

      • Wow, John… that is such an awesome comment! I’m so glad you stopped by to look at this piece and tell me what you think… and make my head swell. Thanks so much! I hope you keep liking my stuff and sitting in my corner watching. I’m all about erotica.

    • Intense write, DK. A lot of depth underneath this steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • I’m so glad you caught that, Damian. This was meant to be like a chocolate Sunday… both hot and cold.

    • If you want intense love making, have an affair. At this point, everyone should have them. Keeps things exciting, fresh and exhilarating for both people. I’m sure your spouse is doing the same. Let’s keep it under wraps. Great work DK. xo

      • You got that right, Keith. The hottest sex I ever had was with a baseball player who nailed me in my rental during college. My boyfriend walked in on us and just watched the whole thing. SHIT! So, I experienced getting caught and getting fucked at the same time.

    • This brings back some memories.
      Especially the stained sheets and after sex mood swings.
      Diggin this vibe for sure

      Naaj

      • Naaj, you totally get me. I apologize for women everywhere when it comes to mood swings and sex, but it just happens. Probably a good reason to get drunk off your ass before you fuck. By the look of you, I’d say you could make me woozy without a drop of alcohol.

    • Meg, this is short but so potent. So straight to the steamy action. And yes alot of depth. You’d make me climax just as quick as this read I must say, I wouldn’t stand a chance holding out! Hehe! 😉

      • Let’s hope not. I don’t want you launching that quickly!
        I’m glad you like the poem, though!

        xoxo

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