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hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕
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Oh! This is very good, Brenda.
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good morning dearest Adagio thank you graciously 💕
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I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞-
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what a beautifully sexy comment thank you graciously Jim 💕
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I love that you think so – “..beautifully sexy…” mmm
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hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕
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Powerful. You paint this scene well.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.
John
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Read MoreYour love is a daggerso plunge it deep into my heart.I cannot stand and do not want mere surface.Drive your blade indont pull it out.Know that in time my heart will absorb itand absorb you. And my legs will part...
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this made me smile dearest Benny great write 💕
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Your smile made me smile…thanks for reading.🙏
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I enjoyed the playful, lightly sinister nature of this. Admittedly, no.. I didn’t see that couplet coming lol.
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Read Morecontemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...
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Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
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hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕
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I don’t think you’re selfish at all. I think you’re hurting. 🕊️🌾
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️
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Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.
John
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hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Outstanding my friend. You take passion and love for this one person and enshrine it into a poem as divine as it is beautiful.
John
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No one in their right or indeed write mind wants to feel down or depressed .. I found this post/poem very much to my liking indeed it was compelling .. Kind regards, Neville
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When you’ve been there, you know
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Peter, this touched my heart. Suffering is used to refine and strengthen us, much like a blacksmith uses a furnace to refine precious metals. Stay strong. 🌹🌾🕊️
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Alexandria et al
Thanks for reading and the comments.Its nice when others understand not just the words but the author.
Love you all
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I’ve had my share of dark thoughts. I don’t want to go back to that place. One can only hope the future is better.
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Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜