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Read MoreCup of Asian noodlesSome Japanese cartoonsHaven’t showered in three weeksMy time is coming soon It's time to eat some RamenBought at the dollar storeAnd in the name of SatanWatch some bizarre tentacle porn Pour some boiling waterPull out your favorite bowlCover...
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Thanks man
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Well to have ramen and thinking about bizarre tentacle porn is one way to kill time. lol
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Yes it is! Thanks Fia..xxx
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Read MoreThey rise like the bones of an old, drowned god—tilt slightly, whispering to the tide.Hunchbacked monasteries on the lagoon,bell towers, slender as heron necks.Monks move shadow-thin through cloisters,chants dissolving into the mist.Screeching vespers over swaying boats,lanterns flicker—small, defiant suns.Salt...
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Thank you for asking me to write on this Atticus 🙏🏻
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It was my pleasure, Drieks.
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Powerfully penned, Adagio & Drieks. Excellent collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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We thank you, Damian.
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Read MoreLong married companions, bodies altered by the slow rivers of years,flesh softened, hair silvered, eyes deepened with unseen storms.He sits content in the quiet grass of doing little,she surges forever onward, busy with the world's endless motions,Going, doing, planning...
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This is one outstanding write Peter. Well said and very well detailed.
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Thanks for the kind comment.
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This is quietly heartbreaking and beautifully observed—love and life in parallel lines.
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Such good writing Peter. So often, couples won’t acknowledge the other until one day there’s one less partner to walk through life with. Death hits hard and the regret of not sharing openly the feelings that still linger underneath.
Your poem narrates characters in a story of their lives. They live through your words. This is so well done.
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Thank you Thomas and Tim for your thoughtful and kind remarks.
I share most of my writing with anyone other than my wife.I wonder how much great poets of the past shared works with their partners.🙏
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. This is amazing storytelling at its finest. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is sad and the description of how things even though you are doing what you must day to day you forget that the partner must be taking care of just like everyone and everything else
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This is probably the way it is for most older couples. Yet always at least parallel, not veering away. Close enough for a hand to hold, to acknowledge the other. I envy that, to have someday. Just to know I am not ever really alone. As bittersweet as it can seem, it is also a reward unto itself. That commitment to stay so near, even if it seems a bit far at times. Hearts have a way…
Wonderful write. Poignant and pin-point.
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Read MoreThe wood of cello's bow clinging,with the rhythm of a coffin's nail, knocking bone to bone...Echoing that I am coming,before the screaming,of my departed soul.
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The bow scratching across the strings mimicking a hammer pounding the nail. The dark of the coffin; the escape from this life to somewhere else…Incredibly dark and spooky. I get a real haunting vibe out of this. As though walking down a cloudy road next to a cemetery and hearing a scream, yet seeing nothing. Only silence. Awesome poem!
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Thank you, Tim.
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Powerfully penned, Adagio. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian