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Read MoreMy tongue is blue from taffy candy While my soul is blue from hypothermic shock My hands shook trying to explain this modern pain While my soul's struggling to stay above water I've blue lips either way
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I’m trying to be hopeful but the emotional support blue raspberry taffy can only do so much
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Last line brings the message home
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Thank you. I kinda came up with the poem based off that line.
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This rocks! Cool poem.
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Like being saved from the freezing waters.
Well done
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blue and
Bluevelvet are now friends
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Charmingly penned, Blue. A lovely up lifting write. Appreciate you.
Damian