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Read MoreWhen human minds begin to fray And souls forget their tune The ones who stand apart and judge Believe they're still immune. But we're all so bloody fragile, Our thoughts can lose their form; No soul beneath the turning sky Can shelter from that storm. Each person...
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I’m fine and thanks for asking.
This poem was prompted by a newspaper article about a woman who changed completely after menopause…..we are very fragile.
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It’s the ones who insist they’re fine when clearly they’re not that scare me. We humas are very fragile indeed
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Well you’re right! And sometimes we think we know them, until we realize that we don’t. The mind is each of our own little universe, it’s so vast. Some people get off track along the way.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. No one is immune to time and the effects it has on the mind. Thanks for sharing. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
I get so much
Satisfaction washing
God’s people’s feet
Also when I teach
The bible to God’s
People they become
Hungry for the bible
It was God that wrote
The bible
With his holy hands
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Interesting piece. Bugs and fans…😊
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Thanks for the read Fia. I hope all is well.
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Powerfully penned, Bat. Another excellent write with deep layers my friend. Can’t believe I missed this one. Amazing read as always. Hope all is well in your neck of the woods. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian Bright Light!
Bat
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Read Moreit lays in my lap... closed... and anything but silent... it's speaking still... my hands resting reverently upon the cover... as a flood of emotions... and memories... pour from my eyes she said it... and I felt it... at every single level... from the surface of thought... to the tiniest molecule...
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Willow…the words od not come to me and I am a chatter box. Amazing spill of emotions.
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Thank you, Fia
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Another excellent write with deep layers of emotion and honest storytelling my friend. This one hits harder than a freight train. I concur with everyone above. You took this one to another level. Outstanding read as always. Appreciate you, Sis.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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You can feel desperation and perseverance in every line. Simply stunning.
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Thank you, Brandon
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Thank you, Peter
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Thank you, Light 💕
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Excellent. Obviously I enjoy story poems the most. It’s in the way it brings the real world into something we all can sense too.
Life is like that, and so writing can be a journal of experience too. This write fills that niche really well.
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This flows like a cascading waterfall.
So much power in each line that it pushes into the next.
Just wow.
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Hi Peter
How are you?
You expressed so much in few lines.
Jessy Jacob