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Read MoreI wrote this poem with no AI interference at all, nope none of that. The only thing AI did was help me get my poem onto this picture. That’s it. Thank you
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Hello there Fia 🙂 thanks for stopping and thank you for commenting. i’m glad you enjoyed this piece
Thank you❤️
Jackie
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Hello Honoria,what a treat to see you here.
Like I was telling Crim it took me all night to write this poem. I’m pretty happy with the outcome. Thanks for looking, sweetheart.
Miss you
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Hello Damian.
Always a pleasure to see you on my page. I appreciate you too thank you my friend.
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Hi there vision, thank you. It means a lot and thank you for reading it and commenting. Appreciate you.
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Thank you very much Abby appreciate you.
Jackie xx
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Diversity
Being a city boy
with Native roots,
I have always loved the feel
of cool, dew-laden grass
licking my toes;
the scent of pine needles
on the forest floor;
the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts
inside my heart,
I begin to see the balance of life.
We are, all of…Read More3 Comments-
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Very good…. I love this part the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts… A beautiful metaphor.. like if a butterfly can sense our thoughts . I do feel they sense those things too. Nice work… Keep it up-
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Thanks Navina, I am glad you found this poem enjoyable. It means a lot and I appreciate your comment
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Of course .. poetry is always good to read. My mind is always thinking so I write it down haha.
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Read Moreinches to miles look how far we've fallen never perfect but better than this they're rewriting what they aren't erasing stacking the deck in their favor throw another log on the fire some say he's crazy and they're probably right but crazy can still be evil as...
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This bonfire is raging with truth.
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There’s a lot of power in truth. And we gotta keep it blazing! Thank you, Fia 😊
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Gotta keep that fire going! Thank you, my friend 😊
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Backsliding into Hell
inches to miles
look how far we’ve fallen
never perfect but better than this
they’re rewriting what they aren’t erasing
stacking the deck in their favor
throw another log on the firesome say he’s crazy
and they’re probably right
but crazy can still be evil as well
and nobody’s stopping his actions
what does…Read More6 Comments-
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Willow, day 6 of poetry month and your words contain fire!!! I have extra matches in case they are needed. -Curt
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Thank you, Curt 😊
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”Your words feel like a cold wind. In my world, it rains when I’m sad, and I can feel the ‘inhumanity’ you’re talking about. If your world is burning, maybe my storm can help put out the flames. We’re both just trying to find some warmth in the dark.”
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Good job
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This is my bonfire of hope. We need it in these cold days. Thank you 😊
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Of course no doubt. We need the warmth to keep the days of life. No problem 😊
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Read MoreWhat do I do When no other can deliver What you do I was created especially for you I don't care what they say I never did anyway Come to me… Your the one I choose Honestly it can only be you No other will do No one knows...
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I love that this allows for no external input. It’s between you and them, nobody else invited.
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Right. Thank you Willow
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A poem of love and longing. Beautiful!
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Yes it is. Thank you M.E
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hello beautiful Fia this is very passionate something about the undertones were menacing or I’m reading it wrong powerful emotions ❤️
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Yes it has a little menace. Good catch. Thank you crimsin
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Aww this is sweet and salty! Haha
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Thank you Adel;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with passion and power my friend. Nicely done as always, great read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz,;))
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Nice! Simple and direct. The best kind of poetry for any day. I like that you chose to write this, and post it. Awesome!
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Thank you, Styxian;))
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Absolute commitment to another. Knowing you were created for them, the person of your choice, to be taken in ways that the world will never understand, nor do you care that they understand. If the other knows what love and heated passion is about, you shouldn’t have to wait long.
A very honest piece of writing, using precise words to deliver your wants, needs, and desires.
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Thank you so much, Randall;))
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The Queen is a dark bad ass. Like the lay out and the rhyme scheme.