appreciate it. couldn’t figure out how to get link to work. wrote it after sharin gymnopédie by Satie with someone I care bout to try to help calm them.

“The melody breaks with no apology”
“The ending doesn’t end but fades”
The whole poem has so many go points these two are my favorite.

“pedal down
smudge the edges
make it all fuckin blur
like a memory
you never trusted
even tho it’s always there.”

Brilliantly penned, Ambjr. That verse is killer, been there a time or two when it comes to songwriting and life for that matter. It’s amazing how they mirror one another. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I read this out loud to my daughter who isn’t “a poetry person.” Her eyes grew wide & she said “Oh…I felt that.” When your words reach someone who claims not to get poetry, you’ve just written a powerful piece. Beyond that…damn

Powerfully Authentic, Ambjr. This write has teeth my friend. Incredible work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love the kiss, the bruises, and not naming them. Also, how do you not want to be fixed? When people want to fix you. Powerful piece.

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. A very introspective piece my friend, a very authentic write. Appreciate you.

Damian

yeah. that’s fine. glad it spoke to you.

That is the holy grail right there. So resonates…

Can feel this nicely done

hello dearest poet a very powerful write no one is righteous some are just better actors 💕

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Love the onslaught of imagery, incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliantly penned, Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! Your imagery is incredible, felt as though I was being hunted. I can relate. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian